| "Her Own World" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Alish On: February 18, 2009 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story! you should continue it!
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Reviewed By: Pandaseal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Yes, it's slightly similar to others, but you put such a unique twist on it. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
im really liking how this story is going so far... keep going keep going. please. =)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 00:17 CST
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although he made some good points apparently he wasn't really listening to what she was saying and didn't give her a chance to rebut and tell him that her first order of business after she was officially crowned was to release all of the youkai in the prison who were imprisoned unjustly, improve the treatment of inmates and remove the person responsible. . . great chapter, inu life at it's finest! ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: ~Sadie~ On: January 24, 2008 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goddness! this is a very original story and a good story line ^_^ keep up the great work and update soon please! ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: Pandaseal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with your fic. I love your characterizations. Normally, I don't like AUs, but you write so well that the story is really believable.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 07:01 CST
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Wonder how long it will take b/f K realizes these are far more than mere wild animals? The foundation has been laid, and she's a quick study, it should be interesting to see how she and IY interact, and how their bond develops. Loving this story.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 03:35 CST
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*eagerly gobbles up newest scraps* kokoronagomu is quite right, if they had left things alone human/youkai relations would have improved on the island. Now things are just going to get worse. *sigh* I really hope that Inuyasha figures out that talking to Kagome might benefit their cause better then just giving orders and ignoring her. Then he might actually learn what is going on with the humans and what her role in all of it was. *returns to sitting on your doorstep waiting for more*
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 01:59 CST
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as long as kikyo is in power innocent lives will be lost. . . their actions have been counterproductive and self defeating. . . she should be trying to be diplomatic and attempt to negotiate a treaty as soon as the self pity gets old. . . one wonders how shippo will react to his new 'home' and if he will want to be with kagome. . . i'm still intrigued and eagerly anticipate more. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 08:52 CST
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I know its wrong but the faster you update the more I want. Gimmie more. I must have more. *eyes glaze over* please more. More! MORE!! *shakes self out of daze* uh… sorry just a little addicted.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 14:42 CST
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aside from the bumps on their heads the hostages weren't harmed. curious to see the inu-youkai reaction to kagome's and shippo's interactions, a mother to her son. it's bound to make an impression. too bad their kidnapping would set back youkai/human relations quite a bit until the princess is given back unharmed and kikyo is removed hopefully sooner than later. good descriptions and transitions. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 18:49 CST
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Hmmm, and the adventure begins! Will be interesting watching this relationship develop, what with all the history and animosity going on. Watching the taijiya and youkai come together will be a treat as well. I look forward to it.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 06:58 CST
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*blink, blink* My that was fast. Thank you for listing that it is an I/K pairing.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 06:29 CST
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I really can't figure out why this story has so few hits. It's well written, it's detailed, it's original, and it was updated quickly. So why aren't more people visiting? The only thing I can see is perhaps because the summary doesn't list the pairing that people might be steering clear. Pity. They don't know what they are missing.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 02:43 CST
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what a wonderfully exciting story! i love the rich detail, the interactions, everything! one wonders if kikyo will ever 'see the light' or will she be deported, executed? one can consider that the atrocities that she was responsible for incited the native populous to act against kagome. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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