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"Before The Fall: A Prologue of Sorts" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ]
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 Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 20, 2008 22:02 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Just found this story today. So I begin reading and now I must say......Aw Man!!!! I was getting so into this story and all of a sudden I find myself at the last chapter. Now I must pine until another is posted. Excellent job. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest.
 Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 20, 2008 18:09 CDT
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Well-written story so far, with an engaging, and slightly tear-jerking, plot at times. This is one of the most well written high-school fics updated right now (it actually has GRAMMAR and is not BASED around pr0n!!!) Kagome really frustrated me at first, with her very wimpish declaration, not having even the guts to face up to him afterwards. The cold shoulder, though, was classic, although I do wish she'd make him work a little for her friendship. But then she wouldn't be Kagome, ne? Kikyo's character was well done, the elements of the anime modernized in this fic. Though I don't think that, alive, she would be so vindictive. Maybe more high-and-mighty (I-am-holier-than-thou, therefore I must save Kagome from the dirty half-breed Inuyasha) than cruel? And Inuyasha pisses me off, period. Well, sometimes. ^-^ The cliffhanger-ish ending leaves me waiting with bated breath for your next update... you won't disappoint me, will you?
 Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net  On: March 19, 2008 20:42 CDT
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"They weren't trying to get in my pants!" "Yet they seemed to get there anyway." - love those lines! Brave to kagome for sticking up for herself, and bravo to you for a good chapter!
 Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2008 18:27 CDT
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Oh, how I loved the kissing scene! Inuyasha is finally, albeit unconsciously, getting that he's attracted to Kags. And good for her for smacking him. It shows great strength in her character. I look forward to the Bankostu scene then!
 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2008 17:59 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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No problemo! I love this story! Nice update too. Sango is so devious, it's hilarious. I can't wait to see how InuYasha plans to 'keep an eye' on Kagome. Hasn't he been doing that all night? lol. ~A
 Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2008 15:48 CDT
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Yay update! I really love the direction you're taking. Can't wait for the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: whorl  On: March 19, 2008 15:31 CDT
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Woah going by Kagome's comment, does that mean Inuyasha has been having sex with his flavors of the week? It's about time Kagome stared dating.
 Reviewed By: Pariah [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2008 14:43 CDT
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Ooh. We're gettin' down to the nitty gritty stuff now. :) I have to say, I adore the development of this story. I think you've done a great job portraying the characters, and all the build-up to the romantic tension has been a really fun read. Can't wait for more!
 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2008 21:21 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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LMFAO! Okay, the ending had me rolling! And Kagome was so cute in this chapter. 'I don't like you right now'. I can just picture her telling Yash that and the look on his face. As always I can't wait to see what'll happen next. This 'friend' thing can't last forever (or at least I hope it doesn't). Plus, I wanna see more of Kikyo. Her characterization in this story is on point, it's exactly how I would picture kikyo in modern times. And it'd be cool to see the ol' love triangle from your POV because so far you've done an AWESOME job. Don't keep me waiting too long ;) ~Amber
 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 29, 2008 21:49 CST
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Oh! I forgot to tell you that you get cool points for quoting my favorite techies, Frou Frou! Ahh, the suspense! Its killing me! Gotta know what happens next! ~Amber :)
 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 26, 2008 17:36 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Amazing, can't wait to see kagome hold her own. And what Sango's gonna do about Miroku. Update soon! ~Amber :)
 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2008 09:42 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Aw...Kagome is so understanding! If not a little naive...lol. Anyways, love the update. Can't wait to see what happens next! And thanks for answering that little bit about the bonfire! ~Amber :)
 Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2008 21:51 CST
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Once again, LOVE your style! Very enjoyable. Look forward to the next chapter...way to keep us hanging!
 Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2008 10:30 CST
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Good as usual. Maybe not such a long wait next time?
 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2008 07:10 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Are you gonna go into details about the bonfire or is it not that important? Just curious...anyways, I really like the monologues. It gives more insight into Kagome and Kikyou's motives and personalities. Will there be more or just these two? Can't wait to read what happens next! You're an amazing writer. ~Amber :)
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