| "Before The Fall: A Prologue of Sorts" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Makai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 11:29 CDT
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pure AWESOMENESS!!! I loved it! You made Inuyasha have a brain!! go you!! usually he'd just yell and cuss!!! You R AWESOME!!!!!! keep writing!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that inuyasha & kagome are a couple now... they are cute together... quite funny and sweet how they act around each other... hope they stay together and overcome whatever trials that come their way... what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha and Kagoe did things just right. they didn't really rush anything....not even Inuyasha's confession. I love how this played out. Great job.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw...this was so cute! At first I was a little confused by the day headings but then I saw the chapter title, put two and two together and went 'Oh...I'm stupid.' lol. I LOVE how their relationship is developing, especially with the things that were said at the end of the chapter :) GREAT update! Can't wait for the next. ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 12:06 CDT
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*sigh* such a good chapter *sigh*
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Reviewed By: s On: April 23, 2008 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story! Post a new chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... lots of action and drama... like it so far... kinda feel bad for kagome though... but at least they're a couple now... hope inuyasha realizes his feelings soon or something bad again might happen to break them apart... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 20:46 CDT
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I had a feeling there wouldn't be a lemon in this chapter. I would've been so dissapointed if Kagome had just thrown herself at Inu and Inu accepted. The ending was GREAT! I can't wait to see what happens from here on...this is getting REALLY good. ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 12:27 CDT
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yay!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 22:49 CDT
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i hate to see her throw herself at him but if he takes her up on her offer when she's so upset it will make matters worse. she's vulnerable but she's using him too. there's comfort and a need for reassurance but sex in that state is not comforting nor is it reassuring. it would be better if he would hold her and convince her that he will still be there when she isn't so upset. . . good story, well written interactions and motivations. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's so depressing :/ but that's why i read these! lol, really though, i am thoroughly enjoying this. Inuyasha is such a fuckwit sometimes :P i think you portray them very well and fairly in character.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Atta girl! That's my kaggie! I thought the ending to this chapter would be InuYasha putting the moves on her, but this was equally as, if not more, great! Wonder what'll happen next..till next chapp. ~Amber :)
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 17:52 CDT
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Enter Houjo! That made for an interesting chapter...wish there could've been more Yash/Kagome interaction though. The epiphany or whatever at the end makes up for it (where Yash realizes he wants to be with Kagome) and Kagome being 'allowed' to date now has me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Till then! ~Amber :)
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 22:03 CDT
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You have magnificently orchestrated the angst, passion, and underlying love between your take on Inu & Kags in your story. I am always impressed by the multitude of emotions you give your characters that also compliment the plot you are weaving. I'm excited for more!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great update! Just curious though...will Sesshomaru and Naraku make any appearances because I'd love to see how you modernize them. Plus, it'd make for some interesting drama. Till next chapter! ~Amber
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