| "Before The Fall: A Prologue of Sorts" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pariah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 19:32 CST
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This is a very enjoyable read, mostly because you have such a fine grasp on the characters. Your insights into their minds, into their motives, and into the sloppy quagmire that is their emotions is fantastic. Can't wait to see Kagome's response to Inuyasha's moment of idiocy. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 18:09 CST
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Ahh..another good chapter. I love this story, I really do. It's so dramatic and original. Keep writing. ~Amber :)
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Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 15:31 CST
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I thonk this could really go far! Its a great bit of drama but there is one thing that does bug me. Your chapters are too short. I;m not saying that you have to write a bible for each chapter, but it seems that they all end really quickly. But hey, its still amazing. :D
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 14:38 CST
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Interesting and engaging style. I look forward to seeing where you take this...please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 06:16 CST
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*grin* I love when an author responds to one of my comments by posting in their story. Whether it was your intention or not, you definitely succeeded in creating an uberbitch. Great name for her by the way. I agree that in the anime, while she was alive, much of her actions were born out of loneliness and dissatisfaction with her responsibilities... after that it's hard to say where exactly her motivations came from. But this is not the anime, it's your story and while some of her motivation might be the same, the desire to crush Inuyasha's soul under her boot heel for having the audacity to love her makes her an uberbitch.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 04:45 CST
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Wow. I know Kikyou is a bitch is most stories but DAMN! That was way over the top of what I am used to. I love it! Thank you. But please don't let her devastate him too badly.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 19:56 CST
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Wow, this story is really good! I love how you portrayed the Kikyo/Inu/Kagome love triangle. This is defenitely going on my favorites. I can't WAIT for your next update! -Amber :)
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved the chapter and i love your story Update REally soon please!!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 23:47 CST
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good first chapter! haha I love inuyasha's reasoning of beer makes girls horny right
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Title: really good.
Reviewed By: Milky_Way586 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far this was really entertaining to me, i really sat down and read the whole thing without putting my mind on anything else. i pretty much 4 got i was litening to music, i was that entertaining. and i love the idea of the gang being in college. keep up the good work.~M.W.
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