| "Starting Over..." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: WELL DONE
Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color Wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying your story. I'm sorry to notice that it hasn't been updated in a few months_I hope you continue it-because it's terrible to start reading such a good story and never get the chance to finish it-that's why I usually only read finished stories. You've done so well. From after the battle with Sasuke's internal dialog; to Naruto finding him and pleading with him to stay alive-the kiss-saving Juugo-the hearing-the punishment (ow)-the friends helping-the description of the damage-Naruto's shyness, boldness, dobe-ness, etc. Sasuke's tour of his house with the memories-Naruto's talk of future good times. The story is so very well set up and continues to build. It makes one want to continue to read. Even though I was grossed out about Sasuke's dream/memory of Orochimaru's treatment of him-it was still well written and gave meaning to the story. Thanks for sharing the story_I hope to be able to finish it when you do.
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 13:54 CST
Comment/Review:
yay their all togethr happy people so seriously i like ur story keep it up it flows nicely nothing seems out of place yay lots of love HAPPY VTINES DAY!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so sad his pain but as always his friends are there *tears* update soon
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your story. It's well written with a nicely developing plotline. I like that Sauske is back, but still doesn't get out of some kind of punishment for leaving like he did. It will be interesting to see how his relationship with Naruto grows and changes.
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love ur story please update soon
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Title: Starting Over...
Reviewed By: msmf On: January 20, 2008 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very well done!! I would very much love to read more when you get a chance?
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Reviewed By: BlackNightFOX On: January 19, 2008 02:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice I like it.And a fun read and is looking to enjoy more of this fine story,so don't go and make a bad one I don't REVIEWS to bad stories so good luck (*=*)smile
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