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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Here's to the birth of a healthy baby girl and a health baby boy. Now comes the names and hopefully the discription of the babies right? I can't wait to see who starts fighting to be the first to hold the babies. You did a great job describing the births. I've never witnessed someone giving birth either...well aside from having to sit through those child birthing shows on TLC (my sister likes watching those shows. I don't looks painful) anyways great work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... that was really nice of kagome for removing the rosary from inuyasha's neck... saved him from all the pain... liked how sesshoumaru helped inuyasha keep his mind occupied - very brotherly... interesting that kouga came to support kagome... so sango had a girl while kagome had a boy... that's good... next is their names and what comes next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 21:24 CDT
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Very nicely done. Good tension, interspersed with proper humor. The birthing itself had me laughing/smiling, as the girls put IY through the wringer. Now the real job begins, parenting two hanyou babes, and caring for their mothers. Should be fun to see!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 01:27 CDT
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Very cute with Rin and Kohaku. Rin always was spunky and fearless. I think the young slayer might have met his match. And way to turn the screws on Sess! Always interesting seeing him in the hot seat. IY? Two mates in labor? You are indeed a cruel critter, Xag. Should really give him a chance to show his mettle and maturity, dealing with both at once.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa o.O both Kagome and Sango are both in labor! Heh, I wonder how Inuyasha will handle it. I bet he was running to the hot springs and once he heard his mates yell for him to tried to turn around and ended up flat on his face. At least that's how I pictured it. Anyways its time to see the pups. Oooh I can't wait to see what they have! Wouldn't it be wild if one of them had twins! Thanks for the update :)
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 09:14 CDT
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Aww! Rin and Kohaku dating. That is so cute, especially the way that you described the great Lord Fluffy as unable to speak when Rin asked him about 'love.' That was hysterical, especially when his jaw opened and nothing came out. I LMAO over that one. I rather enjoyed the whole false labor bit and loved seeing Inuyasha being so attentive to his mates needs. Now the real 'fun' begins. I greatly loved how you set it up to have Kagome to go into labor at the same time as Sango. Talk about Inu having a headache now. That has been known to happen, especially with women that are in close proximity to one another. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... cute scenes with rin & kohaku... seems that sango & kagome are in labor now... wonder how inuyasha will handle them both... will be quite a funny and interesting chapter... also kaede will need help with the births... update soon... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. baby time!! poor sesshy.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 16:50 CDT
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oh wow, both Sango AND Kagome are gonna have the babies? Man, poor Inu. Kagome's probably gonna sit him into oblivion after she;s done. I mean, I've heard that women always curse the fathers of the babies during birth, but I mean, she's got the whole necklace thing going on. She could do some serious damage. And Sango, man she could totally kick his sorry ass afterwards. I can't wait to see how this turns out. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 16:31 CDT
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I thought that you did an awesome job on the shower. Not much that I could add. The only shower that I've ever been a part of was one that was thrown for me, it was from my team at work and about 1/2 hour long. Not much time for anything exciting really, just some pizza and gifts. I loved the whole Inuyasha and cake bit. I thought dogs and chocolate did not mix? Either way, loved the chapter, looking forward to more of this story. For a guy, you are doing an awesome job, I see that you're taking it more from Inuyasha's point of view. Something a lot of us chicks couldn't do. Looking forward to Sesshomaru's answer to Rin's questions. Thanks again and feel free to drop me a line if you need more help.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wouldn't Shippo and Rin be more like sisters and brothers or cousins than Aunts and uncles????
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... things coming along fine... glad that they're together again... wonder what the babies will be... nice they had a baby shower... can't wait for the birth of the babies... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I love going to baby showers. You play games, get prizes, eat (basically have fun). You did an excellent job with the baby shower although the diaper being thrown at the wall...uhh I've never heard of that. So, Rin decided to ask Sess about love? Hahaha, I bet he's squirming now huh...oh I can't wait to see what his reaction/response is going to be. Thanks for the update. Later.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 08:15 CDT
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I was a little surprised about the throwing the diapers at the wall...but I haven't been to a baby shower, so, hell, they probably do that. Anyways great chapter. And I honestly don't think it was that short. But I can't believe Rin asked Sess about love. That's hilarious! lol. I bet he was caught off-guard with that one too! Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 22:34 CDT
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*pssttttt* All a baby shower is is an opportunity for a girl's night in. Think of it as a daytime slumber party... which apparently you did because it came across very accurate. Again with the 'awwww' moments. I can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's response to Rin. (oh to be a fly on the wall and see his face!) We all know there's more to the big guy than meets the eye, but this is going to be good. I love seeing Mr. Sexypants squirm in these stories. (grin)Thank you for another great chapter. See you next time!
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