| "It Takes Two" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 21:40 CDT
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Yep, a cute, funny chapter. Poor IY, so confused by all the 'modern' inventions and rituals. But at least he got his cake! Oh, to see the look on Sess's face...priceless! That's def something to look forward to.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing! I didn't think Sesshoamru would get caught off guard by a question...er...well I sort of did but...you know what I meant. But I really like this story. Please update soon! And Have A Nice Day!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute! I just knew Souta would get all red seeing Sango! Oh and the recent developments with Kohaku and Rin very cute. Oh one more, I thought Sesshoumaru being caught off guard at Kagome's innocent questioning was great.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that things have been cleared... funny how kagome spoke with sesshoumaru - caught him off guard... now just waiting for the births... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 22:20 CDT
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Awwwwwww... several really good awwwww moments in here. I about fell over laughing when Kagome confronted Sesshoumaru about the perfume. (giggle) I'm having a lot of fun reading this. :)
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 21:15 CDT
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I'm greatly loving this story, especially the caught off-guard Sesshomaru. I'm sure that would be a rather interesting story in itself to hear/read, but I'm still enjoying the girls as they go through the hormones, cravings, etc. The baby shower sounds like fun, especially considering who's throwing it. Looking forward to more of this story. Thank you for the update.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 20:46 CDT
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Nice chapter, sweet reunion with Shippou. Sess was a surprise, and fun to see teased, too. Good transition chapter, after the angst of the last. Fun reading, that had me smiling all the way through.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 23:24 CST
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That was handled well, I thought. Having already dealt with the whole Inu hanyou, fuedal era problem no doubt eased their acceptance. But what have you got planned with Sess? Tension? Drama? Angst? Humor? Perhaps all four? Oh yes, our hanyou def got himself into it with this adventure!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 00:39 CST
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I feel for the girls, just finding out that their friend will live longer then them by hundreds of years. That would suck, knowing that Kagome and Sango would live forever and they would die. I'm still curious as to what Koga and Miroku would think of this whole situation, considering that both have loved one of the girls at some point in time. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... that was an interesting chapter... they handled it better that what was expected... that's a good thing for kagome though... glad that they're all together again... now just waiting on the birth of the pups... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, didn't expect everyone's reactions to be so easy going but thats okay^^. Souta on the other hand *giggles* I bet he was over joyed seeing Sango in all her naked glory. lol, I could just picture his eyes grow wide, grin, then frown disappoint cross his face as his mother's hand covered his eyes. Nice job too^^
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa is right! Hi there *waves* I've been reading your fic for awhile but I've haven't had a chance to write a review *bows* I'm sorry. So, what I wanted to say was Nice! and O.o they all got caught! I wonder what the three mates will do cuz I don't think they told the other girls their relationship status right? Well until then later *waves*
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:24 CST
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That was a pretty intense scene, especially getting caught. I felt that a lot of what you described with Kagome's feelings were on the money, especially the whole milk thing. I'm definitely looking forward to how they are going to explain why Inuyasha and Sango are 'doing it.' Thanks for the update, going to enjoy the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:00 CST
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Oh yes, it's on now! I can just imagine the looks on our trio's faces, and the utterly blankness of their minds, as to an explanation. WIll be very interesting, watching them work this one out. But darn it, those girls have the timing of Souta in the recent 'almost kiss' manga chapter. Let's tar and feather them, too!
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Reviewed By: kawaiiyahshie On: March 03, 2008 11:38 CST
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omg! i can't believe it! that she walked in on that! i really can't wait for the next chapter you come up with i just am so hyper. i can't wait for the chapter so please hurry up and type the chapter and post it!!!!!
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