| "Breeding Sasuke" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write not with just great creativity, but with amazing sensitivity. Your Sasuke and Naruto have such a deep and profound love for each other. I like that they still remain to be playful and passionate_even when being sincere. It's difficult to imagine Naruto wanting Sasuke to be with another person_even if it is to create children_I would think that Naruto would also want to be able to give that to Sasuke as well-to be able to give him children. How could the council be against that-the children would inherit the power of both parents_the council would cream their pants to control such power for the village. It's interesting to see Naruto looking forward to having his 'own' family; when Sasuke just explained to him that nothing is their own_they and their children are/will be tools for the village to use. If Hinata died in childbirth_Naruto and Sasuke would be free to raise the child together and maybe have children of their own. I like the fantasy that you have Sasuke provide Naruto with_what a great way to use the sharingan. I also think your voice and internal dialog for Naruto is wonderful. I can't really express as well as you write; how much I enjoy your stories. Thanks so much for sharing. I hope that this is one that you will also continue; or perhaps combine and elaborate upon it with its prequel.
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello this is the second story by that ive read and i still like ur writting update soon
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Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story! Cant wait for more! XD
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 16:23 CST
Comment/Review:
*sigh* damn yaoi fangirls. Neh. Keep updating, even if this fic is troublesome. Ja ne.
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