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Reviewed By: kaoru_rukia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I love it like always! xD so funny xD, poor ichi! xD and I did miss you!! I hope you can continue soon!!!! I want more! xD well you take care, big kisses and a hug
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww this was a really sweet and sentimental piece! Even with the lack of smut, it was really great as you explored into the emotional aspect of their relationship. They both want to protect one another and are deeply concerned for each others safety and well being. You conveyed that very well in this one. Just splendid!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha that was actually quite the amusing chapter! I really enjoyed their interaction as they had their little quibble. And the ending was really funny as well! Ichigo going to the Captain's meeting with Rukia's brother. God knows, he'll be giving him weird looks XD! Once again nice job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFL! Man you really have a way with these little plots XDD! Even with the lack of smut, I still found it great! The interaction was all too funny and I actually snickered a few times because I can perfectly envision those scenarios perfectly. Ah jeez you really bring out the greatness in IchiRuki and stay true to their relationship. Very awesome!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha this one is great as well! I like how you used Icigo's lack of Kido abilities to make an interesting scenario with the two of them. The sex was great as well, but poor Ichigo got beat by Rukia XDD! Guess he need more practice XD! Another good one shot!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh a series of one shots. Look fun to read! Well I like the first one. Rukia making that remark about the red collar from the SS arc really made me laugh. A very humerous yet limey read! Nicely done!
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Reviewed By: alchemist1203 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 22:09 EDT
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I love the chapter! ♥♥♥ And I'm so glad you updated this story. Thank you!! :)
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 11:50 EDT
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Very cute! Loved how Rukia enjoyed getting Ichigo riled up. Loved how Isshin was so protective of Rukia. Loved the allusions to Ichigo and Rukia's sex life... and mostly, I really enjoyed your ideas on how everyone ended up... I totally see Chad leading a quiet life, and yeah, Karin wanting to join the 11th Squad. Please update this collection more!
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 09:03 EDT
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Awww...this was told with such hilarity and fuzziness... good job girl! I love your take on what happens to everyone, and the Isshin parts are to die for! As always, good job...yet again! ~g
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Reviewed By: Kari Izumi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 02:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic is awesome! I seriously LOL'ed a whole bunch, and the sweet stuff wasn't too bad, either. I have a comm at Lj that's geared towards humorous smut fic and this would make a great first submission. The site is here: http://community.livejournal.com/lol_smut/ Good job, I can't for more!
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Reviewed By: kaoru_rukia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 16:40 EDT
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:O I love it!!!! *-* I hope you don't have more, blocker because you write so good *--* continued soon, plz ^^
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Reviewed By: YuyuKawai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 19:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I loved it all!! amazing IchiRuki job, I swear that right now I need cold water XD XD the one-shots were HOT! your lemons are awesome, seriosly... Tituba congratulations for being an excellent writer n.n....keep writing as you can ;) ..well that's all but YEAH I kown about chapter 167 they NEVER held their hands!!! I mean , gahh!! that freaks me out coz' it's such a lie :S, hoping that the anime won't ever do that again, one more time GREAT FIC!! sincerely,XDXD Yuyu°
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Reviewed By: alchemist1203 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 01:28 EDT
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I'm so glad you updated. I love all your fanfics, and don't worry about not getting inspiration. It happens to many good writers once in a while. You'll get your muse back. Don't worry about episode 167. That scene never happened in the manga. If the Bleach creator want something like that to happen in the manga, he would have already put it in. But he didn't. Instead, he have Ichigo carry Orihime like a bag of rice on his shoulder and commenting about her weight. Anime has put extra filler scenes in previous episodes before. I don't count them as canon because they never occurred in the manga.
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Reviewed By: Maianarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 23:00 EDT
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YOU UPDATED! YAAAYYYY!
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 22:36 EDT
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I have to agree with you on your rant!!!! On your chapter - I liked it. I know how much it hurt Ichigo - but I liked that he still made sure she was safe but let her have her space. Or course the return was great!!:)
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