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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 21:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo, I'm absolutely in love with your writing. My friend suggested I read your other fanfic, "Murder My Heart" and I did, and I finished it on here. It is absolute brillance. I will not lie. I think it's one of the best, if not the best, fanfiction I've ever read. And, when I discovered you had even more stories, I was sooo excited. You're SUCH a wonderful writer. You keep Ichigo and Rukia completely in-character, and you put them in different situations that I've never even THOUGHT of before. Keep up your awesome work. I really hope you update soon. ^__^ -Zapenbits
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 07:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh I hated Bleach 167 also! I was told in Japanese culture that holding hands is considered an intimate thing, so whne he did that I nearly gagged! But yes, that does not happen in the manga... in fact Ichigo picks her up from under her arms to carry her down from that high spot, and she's going on about how heavy she must be to him and all... ugh. Okay...back to the story. Great chapter, Ichigo was letting out all that anger from her leaving, in a very GOOD way. Man, I envy Rukia sometimes.
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 05:09 EDT
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hahaha don't worry about the scene! as 07janina07 said it doesn't happen in the manga. Besides we know that Ichigo is NOT Mr. Darcy, so the other fandom can dream on. the original scene was where Ichigo threw Orihime on his shoulder to move faster and he comments about her weight there. that was a crack moment for the manga and the animators just spoiled it. that became OOC but if it had any romantic feeling both Ichi and Hime would be blushing like mad, not to mention Ichigo would never hold a girls hand in that way(at least at that level)=) Besides the IchiRuki fandom is too big to risk take turn in the manga...and about the chapter. well you didn't seem like you lost your will/power to write. Dam it you are as good as always=) that was an emotional chapter and I have to admit that I'm having some sort of writer's block. Its related with the manga/anime. Its because we cant get our dose of IchiRuki and the fanfics are not good lately. FF.net suffers, all the good writers are taking huge breaks and new ones are just not good. so we(as writers) don't feel inspired enough to write...Its sad really...
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 05:00 EDT
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Don't worry...It all has a purpose. He throws her over his shoulder when they are trying to leave and she panics about her weight and he say you're lighter than I thought you'd be.(Now that is funny.) Anyway, do not fret, he calls her his friend much later as well. He tells Kenpachi that he his purpose is to protect his friends. Rukia doesn't die...I'll tell you this it is not Ichigo's purpose to save her at this point...someone else has to and restore the promise he made. I keep up with the Manga...Ichigo and Rukia are too popular not to end up together...no writer would create career suicide to put Orihime and Ichigo together. I mean...I wouldn't want to be the person to read all of that hate mail if he put Orihime and Ichigo together. Orihime is not even popular in Japan...She's like number 9...Hell Grimmjaw is higher on the totem poll than she is...Don't you think Tite Kudo keeps this in mind as he writes. Toshiro is number 1, Rukia is number 2 and Ichigo is number three. Even Izuru is higher on the popularity scale than Orihime (HEHEHE)... and besides...This is the story of Ichigo Kurosaki and how Rukia Kuchiki changed his life. I would even stop reading Bleach if Tite Kudo put Orihime and Ichigo together. I do not like her character...even though I believe her character serves a purpose. I agree with you though...She was scared of him...not only that she had no faith in his ability...if she did she would have never went to Las Noches willingly. Ichigo may have been hurt badly, but he would have never died...She was stupid to believe what was told to her. And besides, I think Ichigo is trying to save Orihime so bad not only because she had become an important friend, but also because of his best friend Tatsuki...I mean come on...Tatsuki would kick is ass if something happened to Orihime. Oh...and as far as Orihime's purpose...I believe she will sacrifice herself and she will die in order to protect everyone else. So don't fret...You are a writer...If this was your story, would you risk losing tons of franchise money by pissing off your adoring readers? I think not. ICHIGO/RUKIA FOREVER. By the Way, Love the update...It so rocks. Keep up the great work and if I can think of suggestions, I will let you know...sometimes other writers can help get rid of Writer's block that way. I know I'm having a very severe case of it right now. GREAT JOB on this one.
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 23:45 EDT
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Great story! The emotions were really wonderful in this one. I didn't even bother seeing 167 because it was so far off from the manga, so never fear! Can't wait for your next super hot Ichiruki story!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, sweetie may be you should try writing something diferent. Like historical or fantasy, may be I can challenge you to do a historical one shot. :D Don't worry inspiration will come soon.
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Reviewed By: kaoru_rukia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love you fic xD really, I love the ichiruki, ad I love how you explain they life in the sereitei *-* I imaginaty and everithing xD continued writing PS: I speak spanish, so I writing very bad in english >.< sorry
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 04:07 EDT
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funny...
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 23:13 EDT
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These one-shots are cute, in a perv-ish way, XD. But aren't the other officers evnious of the sex they have? I KNOW they hear...about it. Aren't they a little green?
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was hot! Rukia as his vice-captain, he will never get any work done with that appetite. Great chapter! I love these oneshots!
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Title: ::Jaw hitting the floor::
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 15:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl you're pumping these chapters out like a smoke stack! Where and the heck are you finding the time??? I get in front of the computer and I suddenly get writers block, or when I have this juciy idea rumbling around in my noggin I rush to the 'puter to write it down and poof! I lose it. Great chapter, GREAT chpater! If the chapters get any hotter than this we'll have to have the fire mrashall over here to monitor any outbreaks! @_@
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Reviewed By: Maianarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 13:45 EDT
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THANK YOU TITUBA!!! Very much enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait to see when Rukia becomes Ichi's VC. They're so not going to get any paperwork done. I'm surprised Byakuya didn't kill Ichigo the first time Rukia had sex with him. @_@
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 11:29 EDT
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Hot. The last two chapters were both very hot. Good job! I can't wait for the rest of this collection... I love that you're exploring a different "what if" for Rukia and Ichigo... and it's great how this collection can be both sweet and hot. And funny!
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 05:39 EDT
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owww such a toughtfull girlfirned that Rukia is! poor poor Ichigo for having Kira as a VC when he could have Rukia but hey, he will have her as his VC now!!! that one shots of yours make my day especially reading them before school makes my boring classes brighter=)
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THE CHAP!!! IT WAS GREAT!!! SO KEEP IT UP THIS IS AWESOME!!! UPDATE SOON!
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