| "Strike of the Predator" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: marrymebulma On: April 30, 2016 20:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TMI but I'm wet! You are a smut queen. Vegeta and Bulma are
easily THE sexiest couple in DB, if not in all of anime and it's
not farfetch that they've got the dirtiest sex life and I LOVE
IT!! God, this was just so hot! Bulma is a squirter! I FUCKING
KNEW IT! SO SEXY! I wish there had been anal action going on too
but this is already a masterpiece. The gossiping office girls were
nice additions too. Haha, they made me laugh.
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Reviewed By: marrymebulma On: April 30, 2016 20:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TMI but I'm wet! You are a smut queen. Vegeta and Bulma are
easily THE sexiest couple in DB, if not in all of anime and it's
not farfetch that they've got the dirtiest sex life and I LOVE
IT!! God, this was just so hot! Bulma is a squirter! I FUCKING
KNEW IT! SO SEXY! I wish there had been anal action going on too
but this is already a masterpiece. The gossiping office girls were
nice additions too. Haha, they made me laugh.
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Reviewed By: urnewfangurl On: December 19, 2015 14:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it and yes, I do want more
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Reviewed By: rennysusanto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2013 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need for more... Love it love it love it... |
Reviewed By: hplovecat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2011 19:30 PST
Comment/Review:
Phew! Very hot!! |
Title: very graphic
Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 07:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
woh! your story is very pornographic very hot, indeed. I knew saiyans were always hungry but not thirsty jeje |
Title: fudging hot....
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2011 20:21 PST
Comment/Review:
Gahhhh, damn that was hot as hell. SHit, I wish my boyfriend was home...:D On another note, excellent story! I love it how Vegeta is so domineering and harsh.... its just.. ahhhh. :) I like. |
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2010 06:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO FUCKING HOT. Just how Vegeta would take command of Bulma.
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Reviewed By: Kuromizu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2010 21:01 PST
Comment/Review:
this was just amazing, id love to see a sequel
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Reviewed By: SilverEye22 On: September 23, 2009 15:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked the way the story unfolds: the newer of two gossiping Capsule Corp receptionists, Parsly, wonders about our illustrious Bulma Briefs. She knows all about flaunting her assets, but as bitchy as she is, does Bulma ever manage to actually get laid? I know enough about the minds of certain fan-writers (like yourself) to know that this question merits Smartass Answer No. 70,463: "She's got Prince Vegeta for a husband. Does THAT answer your question?" And speak of the devil, at least the other lady, Fanny, knows that everyone who values their life had better take cover when Vegeta makes his gate-crashing grand entrance. And the men in that boardroom had better be wise enough to realize that there'd be hell to pay if they didn't stand aside and let Vegeta snatch Bulma up, business-at-hand be damned. Quite as I imagined a Vegeta/Bulma lemon: the prevailing wisdom in the fanfic community is that the more agressive a fictional man tends to be in whatever source is his "canon," the more libido fan-writers imagine him to have. Hence Vegeta just has to rescue Bulma from the bored-out-of-her-blue-headed-mind state she's in at the board meeting. All making for a highly enjoyable read; keep up the good writing!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2009 11:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
Girl for some reason I never told you how I love this oneshot so much :) It's great! It's dirty, just the way I like it *wink wink* ;) I'll catch ya later on DA :D
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Reviewed By: Arumuelle1 On: May 14, 2009 23:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, ya llegué hasta aquí. Dios. Es que termino de leer una historia que me abandona a la frustración de saber que tengo que esperar un capítulo más (después de haber leído todos seguidos), y para calmar el estrés me vengo a leer este lemon. Repito: Dios. ¿Podría ser mejor? HELL NO! Mujer, decididamente eres (y sé que debes estar aburrida de leerlo) una de las mejores escritoras de DB fanfics. E N S E R I O. Y seguiré esperando con todo el frenetismo digno de tus historias los próximos capítulos de cierta otra historia y más lemons como este! u______________________ú
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 05:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH...MY...GOD!!! That was one of the filthiest, dirtiest, sexiest, most lemon-tastic fics I've read, in any fandom. Caprice, you have a true talent, your writing is not only eloquent, but it's amazingly easy to read as well. You exude style, you can really turn a phrase, and your have a delightfuly dirty mind--the trifecta of great fanfiction. I eagerly await your next story, as I know so many others do as well. Keep the lemons coming, sister!
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Title: HOTTER Then HELL
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew that was HOT! I love office sex, especially Vegeta Bulma office sex. Nicely done! There's nothing I can find wrong about it! It's perfect! :) I loved the food related names like Parsely, and how you incorporated capsule into the one shot!
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Title: OH MY FREAKING GOD!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...This story has to be the HOTTEST, Lewdest, nastiest, smuttiest B/V story I ever read to date! I loved every single minute of it!!! Oh my god, I'm at work reading this and people kept talking to me and I was snapped at them! Leave me alone and let me read my smut!!! Vegeta is such a beast; and Bulma is so submissive and yet wanting sooo bad... you know I had this very idea for a story years ago, and it's such a delight to see it actually brought to life! Excellent, wonderful job...I'm going to be needing more of this between your updates of "Making love to a Saiyan", really. @_@
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