| "Strike of the Predator" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: HOTTER Then HELL
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew that was HOT! I love office sex, especially Vegeta Bulma office sex. Nicely done! There's nothing I can find wrong about it! It's perfect! :) I loved the food related names like Parsely, and how you incorporated capsule into the one shot!
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Title: OH MY FREAKING GOD!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...This story has to be the HOTTEST, Lewdest, nastiest, smuttiest B/V story I ever read to date! I loved every single minute of it!!! Oh my god, I'm at work reading this and people kept talking to me and I was snapped at them! Leave me alone and let me read my smut!!! Vegeta is such a beast; and Bulma is so submissive and yet wanting sooo bad... you know I had this very idea for a story years ago, and it's such a delight to see it actually brought to life! Excellent, wonderful job...I'm going to be needing more of this between your updates of "Making love to a Saiyan", really. @_@
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Reviewed By: not a member On: May 19, 2008 20:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
Dude, you are probably one of the best smut writers ever! I mean, your other stuff is great too, I really want you to continue with Forbidden, but this was HOT. Go you.
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Reviewed By: keleos On: May 05, 2008 06:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! AMAZING!!! that was hot! and i also enjoyed it because it had a plot (kinda)!! you did a wonderful job dear!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 21:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
saucy wench!!
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Title: Incredible!!
Reviewed By: Ally92 On: May 03, 2008 20:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
That was phenomenal. Easily my favorite this year. You rock!!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 20:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D :P No words needed :)
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Title: YEAH CONTINUE!
Reviewed By: DRU091 On: April 13, 2008 14:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no questions! continue! please dont leave it at there! please continue! one of the hottest b/v lemons ever!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 16:48 PDT
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I know the point of this was the lemon, but I particularly liked the opening, and the casual and very realistic way you set up the scene. It was very realistic that the employees would be gossiping, and the new one assumed Bulma was a cold bitch who never got any. With the whole code red routine, I almost expected Vegeta to blow up something if annoyed. Then again, he got exactly what he wanted, when he wanted it and how he wanted it, so I guess there was no need to blow anything up. Of Course, she got exactly what she wanted too. The ending was funny too, with everyone trying to pretend she wasnt missing her pantyhose.
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Title: nice opening!!
Reviewed By: lafemmevegeta00 On: March 19, 2008 08:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm writing nice opening because I don't want this to be a one shot. I do expect to see more hentai fics about our royal couple from you because you did a great job. I'm about to read another one of your fics now. I was going to wait until this evening but life can wait for me to get my hentai on. Thanks and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: laredith On: March 19, 2008 00:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. I love the whole "if you owned DBZ there would be more V/B on screen". As it should be! More smut please, you write it very well. HOT.
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Reviewed By: aries_punk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was HOT!!!! But I wish it wasn't a oneshot. Also I can see this becoming a pregfic and a matefic. I would love it if it would become one.
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Reviewed By: Sk8turgurle On: March 05, 2008 11:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! WOW! More, please! I think I need to go find my husband now..........
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Reviewed By: Kricket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 22:02 PST
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While I was reading this, that song called "Takin' Care of Business" popped in my mind, and then Golden Girls came on. However odd that may be, take into consideration that your story is very impressive and you have a knack for writing smut. Go you.
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:59 PST
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More more more! Damn this was so freaking hot!!! *fans face* Oh dear... *clear throats* It was a VERY sexy piece.
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