| "Iruka's obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: ~Ganeshi~ On: February 14, 2009 21:25 CST
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This whole story was sensational, absolutly riviting!!!
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Reviewed By: Alika613 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 06:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! Every way you portray the characters, Iruka gets to be sarcastic, Kakashi is... well, Kakashi. You make both characters so deep, and you didn't rush things. Their feelings seemed very real, it was great! You made Iruka and Kakashi seem like real people. -Alika613
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 06:53 CDT
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Wonderful! The ending was even better than I'd hoped for. Ibiki is a good man and a good friend to them both. I think that it would have taken much longer for them to get to this point if it were not for his confrontation. I also think that Kakashi may be on to something with the 'Itchi Itchi: Abridged' hehe! Everything turned out so well! I particularly loved those little peeks into the future there at the end. "Are you our new mommy?" was hilarious! As was all the students knowing about clouds. hehehe! I'm really glad I stole a few minutes this morning to read this! Thanks for writing! Your insanely overworked fangirl, Jess
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Reviewed By: entity1301 On: June 23, 2008 03:47 CDT
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Id just like to say that I really enjoyed this fic ^^ I love the style, the story, the portrayal of the characters, everything! Thank you :)
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 23:51 CDT
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Oh Iruka! He's always so down on himself. Still, I think that maybe Kakashi got through to him. I loved the banter between Kakashi and Pakkun! They sound like an old married couple! Such fun. As for the delay, your chapters are always worth the wait. And the 1x5 mpreg was such fun. Thanks for writing! Your fangirl, jess
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Title: Awsome Story!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 12, 2008 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall I have to give you the perfect rating, (except for the spelling b/c im no good at it myself and feel I shouldent be rating in that area ^^') This is one of the best IrukaxKakashi stories i've ever read! You've kept my intrest throught the duration of the plot and every time I came home I coulden't wait to read the next chapter, bravo! Looking forward to seeing more of this wonderful story, till next time! ;p
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Title: ch17
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 07:57 CDT
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Oh this chapter gave me such a unexpectedly warm and fuzzy feeling! Pakkun definitely had the best lines: “…I fail to see the purpose of that since its very unlikely either of you will whelp…†and “You can't go there dressed in torn clothes, smelling like a week old condom.†Such fun! As for the way things turned out, well I must say I'm a little surprised it all went so well so soon. But then Kakashi is likely not one to beat around the bush. Thank you for writing! (and sucking me into another fandom) --jess, your warm and fuzzy fangirl
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Reviewed By: sylenctone (once again, too lazy to sign in) On: April 21, 2008 10:56 CDT
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It may be the fangirl in me, but I think Kakashi is definitely softening towards Iruka. Why else would he want him to be unconscious before setting his leg? Oh there's probably lots of reasons. Ibiki's insight was particularly useful. And it kind of felt like he was challenging Iruka to break through to Kakashi, while at the same time offering his approval. I'm sure Iruka will rise to the challenge, hehe! I can't wait to see what happens next! This is so much fun, thanks for writing! --jess, your perpetually lazy fangirl
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 22:59 CDT
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Well now, that went rather better than I'd expected. And I have to think that while they aren't the picture of fluffy romance, that Iruka is slowly starting to get under Kakashi's skin. The more little bits of the real Kakashi he discovers, the closer he gets to his ultimate goal. Of course, he has to survive that long first. As for the name Kakashi said last night... well, my theory is that it was the name of the Fourth Hokage. But I'm a weirdo and know *nothing* of this fandom, apart from having seen the vast majority of the series. I do wonder what has become of Gai and Shizune. I kind of hope they show up and break some of this tension. Thanks for writing! Your fangirl with wild theories, -jess
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 13:06 CDT
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And what delicious lemony goodness it was! I'm really enjoying watching their not-relationship develop. I have my suspicions about Kakashi but that could be my fangirl tendencies kicking in and seeing things that aren't really there. I'm keen to see how rescuing the dogs goes. I've a feeling you aren't going to make this easy on them. :) Thanks for writing! Your lemon-loving fangirl, --jess
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: Karlz4 On: April 07, 2008 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how u write and all that stuff ^_^ I really love this story! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out...and the way u spell come is wrong...its cum lmao sorry..its just a habit...ah well...I'll leave another review when the next chapter comes out! plz update soon!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: Karlz4 On: April 05, 2008 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, omg, omg, omg! yay! lmao XD I'm hyper-ish!! yay!! hmm... ANYWHO! I loved this!!~ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!~ 'squee~'
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Title: Lov ie
Reviewed By: mis love On: April 02, 2008 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love this fic...the struggle between the 2 of them is funny yet painful..you ust cant help to root for them to get together...update soon..and yes!!!! we do want a lemon!!!
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Title: *nods*
Reviewed By: Thenachan On: April 01, 2008 21:30 CDT
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*raises hand* I vote for lemon. Yeah baby!
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Title: WHAT!!??
Reviewed By: Thenachan On: April 01, 2008 21:28 CDT
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GIVE US THE GOOD STUFF!!! DONT HOLD BACK!! >.>
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