| "Iruka's obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelicChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for the update, I can't wait for the next one! And yes please place a lemon in the next chapter. XD I would think if whould fit great there...But I dont know if it should have more romanice feeling or not. I would love to have you put more romanic feel to this one, but maybe it would be to soon for the two at this point...I am just loveing how you are protraying this story, and I don't want you to rush it if its too soon for all that. But if you think it the right time for anther lemon, than YES PLEASE, but a lemon in the next chapter! I would to read it! XD Great Work on the chapter! This is one of, if not the best Kakashi/Iruka storys I have found, and its so in cearter that its hard for me to remeber this is being writen by a fan and not the creater...LOL Great Work! Update as soon as you can! ^___^
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 10:01 CDT
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That would be a "Yes, please!" for the lemony goodness! This has been such a delight to read. And I'm doing my best to *not* get sucked in by this fandom but I think I'm going to fail. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"Actually, do you want a NC-17 scene?" --- YES Please? --- This is an incredible story. The best in-character Iruka & Kakashi I've ever had the pleasure top read. May your muse continue to grant you vision, and the urge to write it down.
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Title: ZOMG!!!!
Reviewed By: Thenachan On: March 31, 2008 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dance* *dance* Yeah this story is the best that ive read about the Kakashi/Iruka pairing in a long time and the story just keeps getting better. Can't wait to read what you write next. Uh oh yeah and I love your writing XD
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 08:17 CDT
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You know, a little part of me speculated that this mystery person was Kakashi, but the rest of my brain said no. So I was still surprised when I saw where this chapter was going. Oh this is such fun! Thank you for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: March 30, 2008 10:07 CDT
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I really like where your story is going and that Iruka is expanding his character. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ok ok you are just awfule i hate you!!!!!! your story is so damn...........good that when i got to the last chapter that you posted i about fell off my couch. i love this story pleas please update soon i so want to read more thanks
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Title: LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: Tee Hee!! On: March 28, 2008 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't do to many 10 reviews but I love this story, please please please write soon! I love this Iruka of yours even more than kakashi, and that's hard for a writer to get me to do!
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Reviewed By: entity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 07:17 CDT
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Hey ^^ I really like this fic and the way it is written, the angsty chapter got to me it was so good :) Cant wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: Shadowwolfie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 02:47 CDT
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I just read it up to today. aww poor Iruka he just get's one problem after the other. I like the fic it's good. Please update soon.
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: karlee416 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY loved this fic so far!~ I really hope u update soon ^_^' I am in fangirl/tired mode right now so...yeah...lmao hope u update soon and I'll check back! bye!
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Reviewed By: Sylenctone (once again with the laziness) On: March 25, 2008 10:00 CDT
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Ooh! A little action with the angst! And I'm really enjoying watching Shizune discover the other side of Gai. I really can't wait to see what happens next but as I'm one of those fangirls (not so) patiently waiting for that GW fic of yours, I'll be happy either way! Thanks for writing! -jess, your lazy fangirl
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Reviewed By: AngelicChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for giveing us such a quick update! XD It was still a little sad to hear how depprested Iruka is, but it give alot of hope of a mearicle happening and him pickinig himself and well, maybe not moreing on (this is a Kukish/Iruka pairng after all :p )But to prove to himself and well as everyone else that he is not as weik or frangle as he seems. ^__^ Way to go Iruka. *pump fist in air* You show them all, what true streath means, and I am not talking phyiscle eather. LOL Great Work! Please update as soon as you can! I have to know what happens next! Great Chapter! ^__^
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 09:21 CDT
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Whee! Poor Iruka! He's riding one hell of an emotional rollercoaster here. But I gotta wonder what Gai knows that he doesn't. The man's a freak but he's not a complete idiot. Oh this is just so fun! Thanks for writing! Your crazy fangirl --jess
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Reviewed By: AngelicChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At any other time, this type of update would not have bothered me to much, cause I know its to move the plot along...but this was the worest frecken time ever! *huff, puff* I was looking for my nice, happy, fluffly, story with Kakashi/Iruka paring fic, casue I was felling a litte...down, and what do I find. The asungst chapeter update. *cry, while, ball* Its just not far I tell you. Not fare at all! .... Ok now that I got that out of my systom. Poor Iruka. *cuddle Iruka, glar at Kakashi* Please do something to help make Iruka feel better, maybe get Kakushi back some how...I know he didn't do it on prupis but damne he could have been just a little bit more understanding about it! *glar harder at Kakushi* Its just not far! He dosn't deserive something like this to happen to him. Please let someting good happen, for Iruka, in the next chapter. Please? *begging, pleading* Great chapter. Update as soon as you can! Good Wrok! ^___^
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