| "Iruka's obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: sylenctone (once again, too lazy to sign in) On: April 21, 2008 10:56 CDT
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It may be the fangirl in me, but I think Kakashi is definitely softening towards Iruka. Why else would he want him to be unconscious before setting his leg? Oh there's probably lots of reasons. Ibiki's insight was particularly useful. And it kind of felt like he was challenging Iruka to break through to Kakashi, while at the same time offering his approval. I'm sure Iruka will rise to the challenge, hehe! I can't wait to see what happens next! This is so much fun, thanks for writing! --jess, your perpetually lazy fangirl
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 22:59 CDT
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Well now, that went rather better than I'd expected. And I have to think that while they aren't the picture of fluffy romance, that Iruka is slowly starting to get under Kakashi's skin. The more little bits of the real Kakashi he discovers, the closer he gets to his ultimate goal. Of course, he has to survive that long first. As for the name Kakashi said last night... well, my theory is that it was the name of the Fourth Hokage. But I'm a weirdo and know *nothing* of this fandom, apart from having seen the vast majority of the series. I do wonder what has become of Gai and Shizune. I kind of hope they show up and break some of this tension. Thanks for writing! Your fangirl with wild theories, -jess
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 13:06 CDT
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And what delicious lemony goodness it was! I'm really enjoying watching their not-relationship develop. I have my suspicions about Kakashi but that could be my fangirl tendencies kicking in and seeing things that aren't really there. I'm keen to see how rescuing the dogs goes. I've a feeling you aren't going to make this easy on them. :) Thanks for writing! Your lemon-loving fangirl, --jess
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: Karlz4 On: April 07, 2008 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how u write and all that stuff ^_^ I really love this story! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out...and the way u spell come is wrong...its cum lmao sorry..its just a habit...ah well...I'll leave another review when the next chapter comes out! plz update soon!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: Karlz4 On: April 05, 2008 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, omg, omg, omg! yay! lmao XD I'm hyper-ish!! yay!! hmm... ANYWHO! I loved this!!~ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!~ 'squee~'
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Title: Lov ie
Reviewed By: mis love On: April 02, 2008 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love this fic...the struggle between the 2 of them is funny yet painful..you ust cant help to root for them to get together...update soon..and yes!!!! we do want a lemon!!!
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Title: *nods*
Reviewed By: Thenachan On: April 01, 2008 21:30 CDT
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*raises hand* I vote for lemon. Yeah baby!
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Title: WHAT!!??
Reviewed By: Thenachan On: April 01, 2008 21:28 CDT
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GIVE US THE GOOD STUFF!!! DONT HOLD BACK!! >.>
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Reviewed By: AngelicChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for the update, I can't wait for the next one! And yes please place a lemon in the next chapter. XD I would think if whould fit great there...But I dont know if it should have more romanice feeling or not. I would love to have you put more romanic feel to this one, but maybe it would be to soon for the two at this point...I am just loveing how you are protraying this story, and I don't want you to rush it if its too soon for all that. But if you think it the right time for anther lemon, than YES PLEASE, but a lemon in the next chapter! I would to read it! XD Great Work on the chapter! This is one of, if not the best Kakashi/Iruka storys I have found, and its so in cearter that its hard for me to remeber this is being writen by a fan and not the creater...LOL Great Work! Update as soon as you can! ^___^
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 10:01 CDT
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That would be a "Yes, please!" for the lemony goodness! This has been such a delight to read. And I'm doing my best to *not* get sucked in by this fandom but I think I'm going to fail. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"Actually, do you want a NC-17 scene?" --- YES Please? --- This is an incredible story. The best in-character Iruka & Kakashi I've ever had the pleasure top read. May your muse continue to grant you vision, and the urge to write it down.
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Title: ZOMG!!!!
Reviewed By: Thenachan On: March 31, 2008 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dance* *dance* Yeah this story is the best that ive read about the Kakashi/Iruka pairing in a long time and the story just keeps getting better. Can't wait to read what you write next. Uh oh yeah and I love your writing XD
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 08:17 CDT
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You know, a little part of me speculated that this mystery person was Kakashi, but the rest of my brain said no. So I was still surprised when I saw where this chapter was going. Oh this is such fun! Thank you for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: March 30, 2008 10:07 CDT
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I really like where your story is going and that Iruka is expanding his character. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ok ok you are just awfule i hate you!!!!!! your story is so damn...........good that when i got to the last chapter that you posted i about fell off my couch. i love this story pleas please update soon i so want to read more thanks
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