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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 02:46 CDT
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i'm not sure if miroku's rosary is going to help her but it would have great sentimental value and there could be more objects that she could recognize that belonged to her friends. . . looks like yasha is getting his kicks changing form and fighting while no one can see him. the waiting is agonizing (sympathy for kagome). at least her friends will keep her occupied for the most part, i like how the males just kind of ducked their heads and tried not to be noticed when she was ranting. one wants to hurry it up and see the resolution and also dreads it. wonderful story, compelling and exciting. ~ salutations, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok now I am very curious as to what Miroku's prayer beads are doing in the shrine and how they will help. I am sure you have devised some nefarious plot in which they will help bring Inuyasha back to Kagome or will help Kagome bring Inuyasha back to her. I can't wait to see what it is. It was touching to see Kagome's grandfather go to all the trouble of doing such a serious search to help his granddaughter. He might not wholly approve of Inuyasha, since he is part youkai, but he cares enough about Kagome to put that aside and try to help her keep her lover. The suspense is building nicely and making the wait for updates agonizing. Good job.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 01:02 CDT
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ginny isn't doing well with suspense but she will suffer through because she knows she must. she also knows that it'll be worth it. good chapter you're setting this up (scary stuff) really well. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. Fast thinking for Inuyasha to come up with a reason that he knew about Sango and Miroku's son. Poor Shippo having to be the one to inform Kagome about Inuyasha's leaving and the pregnancy. Kagome took it better than I thought. She is still going to be mad at Inuyasha for leaving when he returns. Why do I feel like Inuyasha is never going to find the time to talk to Miroku? I think that everything is going to happen just as it was relayed to Inuyasha but he will survive. He has to, he has a child and mate to return to. I can't wait to see how you arrange Inuyasha's survival and what he finds in his reconnoiter around that he is currently doing.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And so the final act begins. Kagome is going to be so angry at Inuyasha when she realizes that he left without her. I know he will make it, he has so much to live for now. He has Kagome willing to be his wife, the child she is carrying, all his youkai in the New World and a better relationship to build with his brother. About the chapter, I liked how Inuyasha went with Kagome to meet her friends and then stuffed his face with hamburgers to keep from having to answer questions, too bad for Inuyasha they didn't go to a noodle stand where he could get Raman. The only thing missing was a run-in with Houjo. It almost seemed as if Kagome was saying goodbye to Tokyo with Inuyasha during their time together. Shippo is going to have his hands full keeping Kagome from following Inuyasha down the well. He might be able to with the news that she carries Inuyasha's child. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And so the final act begins. Kagome is going to be so angry at Inuyasha when she realizes that he left without her. I know he will make it, he has so much to live for now. He has Kagome willing to be his wife, the child she is carrying, all his youkai in the New World and a better relationship to build with his brother. About the chapter, I liked how Inuyasha went with Kagome to meet her friends and then stuffed his face with hamburgers to keep from having to answer questions, too bad for Inuyasha they didn't go to a noodle stand where he could get Raman. The only thing missing was a run-in with Houjo. It almost seemed as if Kagome was saying goodbye to Tokyo with Inuyasha during their time together. Shippo is going to have his hands full keeping Kagome from following Inuyasha down the well. He might be able to with the news that she carries Inuyasha's child. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 09:54 CDT
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Kokoronagomu, thanks! My first present! I'm reading all these reviews avidly--they're so great! I know I don't interact too much--I'm shy?! But I appreciate the support from all my reviewers! It's getting down to the end--I wonder what's going to happen! Justkidding--I have some idea! I may have to eat a few rum balls for inspiration!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 22:45 CDT
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one feels his resolve and her desperation. . . the imagry, scenery, characters, emotion... like a master craftswoman, weaving threads of many colors, artfully creating a beautiful tapestry each chapter giving shape and form. . . a rich and sinful reward for such a beautifully colored and richly textured piece: ::ginny's rum balls:: ~grind up: walnuts, dates, almonds, raisins, pecans, coconut, chocolate chips(lots and lots)...add more sticky dates and raisins if not gooey enough ~mix in: mini-chocolate chips, 151 proof rum ~roll in ground nuts, cocoa powder, or finely ground coffee(hazelnut coffee is good) because you don't cook them the alcohol is still there... warning: eating too many rum balls will make you drunk >=P~ ~ salutations, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Inuyasha didn't want Kagome to drink because she was pregnant. That was the "blessed event" that Ayume was referring to when she first greeted Kagome and Inuyasha. Obviously Kagome does not realize yet that she is pregnant and Inuyasha does, so when he is going to tell her? Is he going to wait until just before he gets ready to go back or is she going to find out before that? I can't wait to see how Inuyasha survives this.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 19:24 CDT
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now that they know they don't have to convince him to go back, he may as well get to meet all of the people his (hopefully not) sacrifice allowed to live and exist. ~ always a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 17:12 CDT
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ji'm assuming that she's pregnant, the youkai can smell it but yasha doesn't her to know although if she knew she would be less likely to take unnecessary chances. that's probably why he is determined to keep her in the present... this better not turn into a kag/sess, ginny would be very ticked. >=/ it's not a threat. . . i shall attempt to block out my fears and continue to broadcast my positive vibes. . . good to see shippo and i'm assuming yash acquired promises from their youkai friends that kagome and child will be taken care of if he doesn't make it back. . . you know how obsessive fans can get if we have become invested emotionally, you should take it as a compliment to your talent. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 23:19 CDT
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I just don't really see Kagome letting InuYasha go without her, not without being ROYALLY pissed off. If he did die, it would just tear her up inside... and if he didn't die, and just lived for 500 years, he'd have all that time to change... Kagome'd still be pissed *nodsnods* I'm intrigued with where you're taking this, I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not surprised that Seshomaru underestimated Inuyasha and his commitment to saving lives since he, Sesshomaru, had no such thing. It was good to see Shippo surviving and the decendents of the others. It shows that if something does happen to Inuyasha there will be others to care for Kagome and possibly any children that Inuyasha leaves behind. I am still hoping for a happy ending for Kagome and Inuyasha. It will be good to get more details from Shippo as to what happened in the past since Inuyasha and Kagome are both going to pump him for all that he can tell/remember. Looking forward, as always, to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 02:03 CDT
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as it comes down to the wire... one feels trepidation. . . it is 3am, i'm crashing and my brain has shut down so please pretend this review is witty and relevant so i can turn off the computer and go to bed. good chapter though. ~g'night and sorry, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am torn about Kagome's decision to go back with Inuyasha. I worry about what will change in the past if she goes since everyone says she wasn't with him, but I also think the two of them should be together to face what comes. The transformation of Sesshomaru was interesting, from the aloof taiyoukai to the open, caring brother back to the aloof demon. I can't wait to see how he reacts in the present if Inuyasha makes it back or how he treats Kagome if Inuyasha doesn't survive. I still am placing pleas for Inuyasha's survival but will still like the story if he doesn't. I am awaiting the final verdict with bated breath even though it will be several more chapters down the line yet.
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