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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 12:23 CDT
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forewarned is forearmed. the possible problem with her going back is that if he survives or not the well may not work after he sets off meidou zangetsuha in the middle of it... then how will she get back? choose to live for five centuries alone or even with her youkai/hanyou friends until her time? that would be a bit of a twist on the stories where yasha waits for her. i am emotionally invested and continuing to send positive vibes to you. ya feeling them? @.@ ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kagome made the decision to become pregnant instead of Inuyasha making it to prevent Kagome from going into the past with him. I like that. I still think it is hilarious that Inuyasha's youkai are afraid/distrust Sesshomaru when he is the one to get Inuyasha to help them. I like how Inuyasha is arranging protection for Kagome in their new home if something happens to him. Fenn seems to be getting closer to Jenn, is there a possible hanyou child in Jenn's future? I am looking forward to what comes next and to seeing later how Inuyasha survives the explosion in the past. (Yes I am pushing for a happy ending)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 22:53 CDT
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it's bittersweet, she doesn't know if he'll be coming back. *wipes eyes* . . . "positive thoughts and vibes. positive thoughts and vibes."
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 05:36 CDT
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Would have loved to see the look on Sess's face! Priceless. Things are def ramping up here. Will be fun to see how you turn this out, given all the hints we've gotten so far.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter. I loved that Inuyasha made Sesshomaru speechless. His anger at being locked out of their home was nice but his seeing Inuyasha transform into both forms was the best. It was so great to see that Fenn doesn't seem to trust Sesshomaru. And it was really great to see that Sesshomaru regrets the lack of development in the relationship between himself and Rin. I really hope that Inuyasha survives because Kagome would be heartbroken without him and their youkai would not be as accepting of her as they are with him around. He would leave so much unfinished if he died at this point in time. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 21:01 CDT
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if he doesn't make it back i'm not sure if kagome would want to live by herself... probably opting to move back to japan and live at the shrine with her family for a while. still thinking positively though. honestly, i wouldn't continue reading this if i thought for a second that the outcome would be tragic. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 12:36 CDT
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cool, like the mountain youkai who naraku killed to get fuyouheki (orb that hides youki). . . still curious what fenn is exactly, i'm thinking whatever he is he's an herbivore. . . yes, the humor, make sure you use a bathroom since we're here. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Wait Kagome do you need to find a bathroom first?" I howled after reading that line. It reminded me of many family trips with a change in the name. I liked hvow Kagome got to show her power to Fenn in a way that was not threatening and also allowed her to do a good deed by making the prayers go where they were intended to go. It was interesting to see Inuyasha fight in dog form. It would be very interesting to see Sesshomaru's reaction to Inuyasha in dog form. I can't wait to see what happens next and who they find next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 00:41 CDT
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one wonders if fenn isn't kitsune... or butterfly. . . i guess it's business as if he didn't believe he was going to disappear in the very near future, like he and kagome had done to organize the youkai human relations on their last visit to the sengoku jidai. at least the new world youkai will have a chance. . . is shippo alive and all grown up in the present? ~ truly a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not surprised that Inuyasha has trouble liking Wormwood, they are so similar in attitude. It is also not surprising that Kagome got along well with him for the same reason. What was surprising was Inuyasha showing a little of Sesshomaru's attitude towards the youkai. Liking being feared. I wonder if Kagome or Sesshomaru will see it and call him on it or if he will realize the similarity on his own. It might be interesting if Sesshomaru is the one to see it and say something to Inuyasha about the attitude. Now Inuyasha has to deal with wolves again, he will be happy if they have Hakkaku and Ginta's attitude more then Kouga's. It will be interesting to see if Inuyasha holds his animosity towards Kouga against these wolves. Looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great update. It is touching and sad to see how Kagome and Inuyasha are trying to make the most of the time they have left. I am surprised that Kagome hasn't sabotaged her birth control yet so she will have Inuyasha's child at least. Maybe Inuyasha could do it to have a reason to keep Kagome out of the fight. If you are taking votes on Inuyasha's survival, I really really want him to survive and live with Kagome. They have a great future spread out in front of them now and it would be too sad for it to end here and now. Inuyasha has come such a long way from the rude boy pinned to the tree that he deserves the reward of a long life with Kagome. I am glad that Inuyasha's powers are growing and developing and he is taking the time to train them to make them stronger. I am also glad that he is being accepted by all of the new youkai and that Fenn is going to make introductions. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 21:57 CDT
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wow, he can transform into the dog too? like he's full youkai... wondering when he's going to tell sesshoumaru. . . about the well, the reports of his death (hopefully have been highly exaggerated) happened in this dimensional timeline so thinking of the loop theory if the well was destroyed in the sengoku and still worked in the present then the well magic may not have been destroyed just possibly the structure and then rebuilt. . . i'm banking on yash surviving maybe preforming meidou zangetsuha just before the time slip grabs him because you don't seem to me as an author of angst and sad endings... even if i'm wrong i shall remain in denial and imagine my own ending: everyone lives happily forever after, the end =P~ ~ with optimism and positive vibes, ginny
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Reviewed By: lil6ter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm…still sounds like my suspicion was right…so far. Great chapter again! I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 11:33 CDT
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hmm, big black line extending from inside the well going straight up...? could it have been meidou zangetsuha, it would have swallowed up the horde of youkai and it's black?... it would have 'fixed' the well so it couldn't be used until it was repaired so that when kagome tuned fifteen she could fall into it and start the whole paradox. now i'm dizzy. . . i'm hoping for the happy ending (i hate suspense). just kidding, good chapter if not a bit depressing. ~ all the best! ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 11:08 CDT
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all of the posturing for kouga... i don't really understand why they don't tell kouga about the time travel, i would assume that he could be trusted in way especially since he came to appreciate yasha's contribution to his family. also they could ask him why he act as if it was unusual that kagome may still be alive after 500 years, maybe learn a way to keep her alive as long as yasha. (wondering if association with youkai can effect human life span just as youkai corporeal existence is affected by human association). . . i love the yash kouga interaction and explosive dynamic especially when it concerns kagome. ~ thank you, ginny
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