| "Feel Like Makin' Love" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2013 14:11 EDT
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I see you haven't updated in a while...I love this story. Update! |
Title: ch1-19
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2012 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an amazing and unique story, you have given a true exploration of the characters, I love the scenario and how you are showing their relationship develop and progress, I really hope that you update this story, as I am totally absorbed in this universe you have created it is so believable the characterisations are enthralling, the dialogue realistic conversations, you are very talented, I love you inuyasha you have really given a lot of thought into how the time difference and life experience would have effected the characters, and I also like your original character Emiko. I always feel that a true test of a writer in this fandom is the depiction of sesshomaru, such a hard character to write and make believable but you absolutely nailed him. He still is the cold youkai, arrogant, yet I don't know how you did it but you managed to show hissoftness still, I adored his interactions with rin, and actually miss her presence, you showed her adorable heart, and let us truly know why she impacted sesshomaru. That bit where he orders everyone to leave, and she says 'must rin leave too?' and he doesn't say anything, but you know he doesn't want her to leave. I really wonder how their parting was and imagining the scene where he had to give her to Kohaku. I have work in the morning, but who cares, I'm gonna read some more of your stories, you might get me fired lol |
Reviewed By: gk_11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2011 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story its so cute cant wait to read more so keep on writing some good chapters |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2011 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that inuyasha has started the plan to get emiko see kitomaru... looks like kagome still is unsure of her feelings for inuyasha?... but inuyasha is quite sure of his feelings and will consider getting a job... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2011 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful new update! I'm glad it looks like things are still going smoothly between Inuyasha and Kagome, and their plan is in the works to get those other two kids together as well. Inuyasha teaching the city youkai kenjutsu is a fabulous idea! It's perfect for him, since he needs a job of some sort both to support himself as well as keep himself occupied, and honestly, he isn't really all that qualified to do much else other than fight. Sure, he could perform any kind of manual labor, really, but he would probably get bored with it, not to mention having to take orders from somebody else. With teaching kenjutsu he would be the boss, and because of who he is, blood wise, he has the resources at his disposal to initially get the project off the ground. Perfect! |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2011 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that things are going ok for kagome and inuyasha... but looks like they are trying to figure out a way to get emiko together with sesshoumaru's son... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2011 07:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! What a pleasant surprise this morning, to see an update for this long gone (but not forgotten) beauty. I was beginning to worry that everyone had abandoned MM after their crash. It's certainly a lot more echoy in here than it used to be. I'm slow-going with getting my butt over to FF and refavoriting everybody, so if other stories I've been reading have been updated over there I know I'm missing out. Thank you so much for posting this update on this site! Thank you so much for updating this story at all! LOL, it was a really cute continuation of where you'd left off and now I'm right back where I'd left off...super looking forward to the next update! :-) |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that inuyasha and kagome are still trying to get used to each other again... nice that they're spending time together... what will they do to help emiko... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. Keep 'em coming!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 21:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
sweet! sorry this is so little and so late, stuff happens and things get shoved aside. great story roxy! ♥
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2010 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... at least inuyasha was able to spend time with kagome a little... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2010 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww he loves her
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2010 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a sweet little update. Whoopsie on the window! Glad Mrs. Higurashi seemed to be so understanding, and I liked Jii-chan's brief splutter at the news that there are more youkai out there than he thinks. I'm glad Inuyasha's willing to be so patient with Kagome, even though it's clearly torture for him. It's easy to understand things from both of their perspectives. I'm sure it'll all work out, with time. Looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2010 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol InuYasha needs to think before he starts breaking things. haha
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2010 09:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that things for kagome and inuyasha haven't gone as smoothly... but they're working on it... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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