| "Chou Shoki I: Learning from Yesterday" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Title: Love Your Story
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2010 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I must say when I found your story 4 days ago I fell in-love with it, every night before bed I read as much as I could. :) you have serious skill. I loved your cliff hangars and how you have been molding your story. beautiful. I cannot wait to see where you take this. Second.... I am sorry for your loss, even though its been so long I know he will always be apart of your heart.
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Reviewed By: Sprinks On: July 09, 2010 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS UNBELIEVABLY GOOD AND I DONT WANT YOU TO STOP!!! i found this story on ASS, and have come from there to this site just to read this story. :) Just know you have some amazing talent in writing and this story would get you far, if it wasn't for FanFiction purposes :) Please don't stop writing, and continue :) MUCH LOVE, Number 1 fan, Sprinks :)
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Title: Lot to Say (sorry)
Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever (not logged-in) On: December 13, 2009 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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heh, it's been a long time. i recently rediscovered your fic. i thought you'd abandoned it for some reason. it didn't occur to me you'd changed the rating and i never faved it. and i never looked past T. i don't care much for ratings anymore. but i was pleasantly surprised to know you had kept it going. also, reading through it again, now with many more chapters, i realized...it wasn't that confusing. i was just too young to understand it. and i'm VERY pleased with what i understand. i decided i wanted to read through it completely and all the reviews before i reviewed again. took longer than i would have liked but here i am. looking back i realized, i was the first reviewer! wow! that makes me happy and feel special. and also, i wanted to ask you if i could draw Juro and my favorite scenes. if i can remember them all that is. you could e-mail me again like you did so long ago. i'd like to say, you are becoming the next Resmiranda. i just hope you don't become QUITE so long winded. it took me many weeks to finish her story and it took me 2 or so to finish yours that isn't even finished. lastly, i'm very sorry to know what happened to Kesh. i can't imagine what you're going through. i'm sorry if i'm saying things that don't help or making you feel worse. i can't wait for the next update, but i understand if it will take a while. sorry, i made this so long. nice to know you again.
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Reviewed By: haynINUpup On: July 19, 2009 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wanted to say that your story is amazing and i am holding my breath for your next chapter. i have just recently come upon "a single spark" and have followed it here to mediaminer. i am eager to know exactly who ryuu and yasuhani are, but am enjoying the suspense. =^_^=
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 21:51 CST
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Hey! I hope your hubby recovers quickly! I also wanted to say that I love this story! It's very emotional and has that..feeling about it that I can't explain-it's a good feeling though. I look forward to your next update!!! much love, DemonandGoddess4ever
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Title: whoa...
Reviewed By: yoshi takata [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ten for me means so past excellent that i pee my pants. you are so good!!! i hope your 'hubby'(as you called him) fells better. when my mom was pregnant with me she drove the car in to a tellephone pole. i love the imagrie that you put in to it. it was so real that i could see it happen. but i must ask where inuyasha is i know that there is a character in ther that has all of the letters in his name but jumbled up. could this be our elusive hanyou? and what of sango, miroku, shippo, rin, jaken, and a-un?well it isnt my fic so i dont even have to tell you to do what you want. i just want to say that you are my fan fic idol. my sister kaori would like to say a few words..., yes well thank you yoshi. she is being especially nice and is useing her manners. that is rare. it must be because you are truley an artist in the art of liturature. it is herd for yoshi and i to express how truley wonderful you are. forever your slaves in liturature, ~kaori and yoshi takata
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Reviewed By: MissSparkle On: October 27, 2008 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) Hello. I am a dear follower from A single Spark! This is so awesome!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! My goodness i've been waiting for months. But I guess more the wait the better eyy?? The last chapter has put me at the edge of my seat... i'm pretty sure i've read this twice! I have to say I'm a dear fan of yours. Keep up your amazing work!! xoxoxo MissSparkle
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Reviewed By: innocencedied2nite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have created a truly wondrous story. One that catches the reader' heartstrings and doesn't let go. I have found myself laughing and crying by turns. The emotional roller coaster you put us through is breathtaking. I have been reading this over the past few days, and am very very anxious to read more. You have stated this is somewhat of a series. I assure you, you will have me as a faithful reader all the way through. Not since I read "Tales from House of the Moon" have I been so enthralled with an InuYasha fic.Please keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: July 30, 2008 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you have got me sitting here in the middle of the night reading this... I can't stop lol. You really left a cliffhanger here.. Once again amazing story plot and you keeping me wanting for more! All I got to say to you is that you're awesome so don't stop
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 16:55 CDT
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gods I love thhis story,I can't wait to read more of this,,it is very good ,,the suspence is killing me lol,,I love it
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 17:09 CDT
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I agree what you said if they didn't like it stop reading.Though I like your story and it is great that a person can right the people in different charactors,,thats what makes stories different from the others.I like it when bad boys are bad boys ,but I like it to when there different and I also like it when good girls are bad asses so to speak,I have wrote on fanfiction and tried here but couldn't figure out how to put other chapters on so I erased it..I do love your story and hope to read many more,I also thing you are a good writter as well no matter what anyone says.Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luved it!!!!! I can't believe how gifted you are!!! Take your time as i always say your story is worth every second!!!! Plz don't stop!!! You'll kill me (ok not really but yea)! Can't to see what happens next......luv ya review you later.
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Reviewed By: gerjks On: July 20, 2008 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still a good story, the only reason for the rating is to encourage you to continue. Good luck to you wherever you may need it.
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Reviewed By: celestialmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I followed this over from Single Spark and I am very pleased with the story. It's differences to anything I have ever read are intriguing and I am hooked. So please continue!
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Title: Go Prince Han!!!
Reviewed By: Hazeru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fake identity, stolen kiss, and dirty talk were so funny and refreshing from the usually behavior. I can't wait to see what the next day will bring for my favorite characters!
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Title: :o)
Reviewed By: lil_one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 15:42 CDT
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I'm not a very big kag/sess fan... but this story is amazing. i just dont understand why i havent seen it before!!! I found it and read chapter one though chapter 31 in two days.... which is quiet hard since i have a job and school lol keep up the great work... cant wait till the next update!
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Reviewed By: Half Kat Demon Kagome On: June 29, 2008 22:15 CDT
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I really liked this chapter, I think that this is my favorite chapter yet. Kagome and Sesshoumaru opening up to each other, Lana acting like a mother towards Kagome and giving her, her approval, to just everything! It was great!!! And I am so sorry that I haven't reviewed in like forever or read, but I was on a trip with my uncle and auntie to Jamaica and when I got back I was so busy reading the Twilight series with my friends that It took like a month. So I'm so sorry, but I still ove this fic. It's totally awesome. Well, I hope you update soon-HCDK(Sorry once again, I forgot to log on.) This is so not my day-.-
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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: June 23, 2008 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good!!! I honestly think it's one of the best stories I've read inj almosst a year because you have an interesting plot and it's original so plz update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! There getting closer! How cute!! I do agree with the others that the dreams are confusing and it does sound like inuyash. I love that he was there in the storm with her it was so cute!! I can't wait for the next chapter! NO hurry but still can't wait for it!!! lUV ya lots!!
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Reviewed By: makumba-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i have just read through these 30 sum chapters and i a thoroughly impressed. i sometimes get confused with the dreams because it sounds like inuyasha talking, and someone has probably said this already. But i am in love with this fic. i have sat for hours trying to get these chapters done, and i am so excited to read more! i am also impressed with how well you write. very few grammatical errors, i have seen a few but none that would throw off my reading, and i look forward to your updates!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot!! She finally admitted it. She is smitten with our Sesshy! Oh yes! I wonder if he will still show at the ceremony. I bet he watches her, lol. I am glad to see that she is finally warming up to him and that when given the chance he didnt back away from her and her question to him, instead he opened his heart and trusted her with his fears. That was an important moment for both of them. However I am a little nervous about the mystery man. I am pretty sure who he is, just not his role in this whole thing. I will wait and see. Glad to have gotten more to read from you. Thanks for the update, I appreciate it more than you know. Until next time, you take care.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 11:00 CDT
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PLEASE DON'T TAKE AWAY THE STORY!!!!!!!! I REALLY DON'T THINK ITS A GOOD IDEA FOR U TO TAKE AWAY A GOOD STORY AS THIS I LOVE THIS STORY! oh please update soon so i know not only what happens but ur answer!!!!!!!!!! :'(
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't cancel this story is great and i love reading it! You have an fantasic imagination and i can't wait to read more. I truly love this story from the beginning. I can't wait to read more and see what happens next. I love kagomes character and Sesshomarus there like the opposite together but fit perfectly for another. I understand that you will not be able to update as much but take as long as you want i can wait! I can't wait to hear more! Dah88
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Reviewed By: eriste [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't take this story off of mediaminer! It is a wonderful story, and it would be sorely missed if you removed it. I hope you update soon, and if you do decide to remove it, please provide a link to where ever it will be posted.
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**2nd review**OMG....I just thunk it!! Did Kags mother and Sess's father have an affair and a baby was born but that baby was taken away and hidden and that baby is Inuyasha?? Sess's father doesnt know if it was a boy or girl therefor has to make sure Kags isnt his daughter?? Do you see what your story is doing to me?? Lmao...uggg, I need a drink. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, So here I am again!! Lol. Your story just got so much more interesting. Is the man she met her brother?? Is he alive after all this time?? Her father, is he really her father? Is Sesshomaru's father concerned that they may be related? Is that what he is trying to figure out? Man my brain is on overload trying to figure it all out. Hmm, tis very interesting. Is Kagome transforming when Sess finds her?? If I knew what the Butterfly effect was, maybe I would understand. Lol, see I do read your author notes. Thanks for the update and congrats on the promotion, those are always nice. Take care.
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 23:41 CDT
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Hey! I just finished reading your updates, it really good, I'm trying to figure out who that guy is Kagome was talking to. Is InuYasha going to be in this fic, because the guy in her dreams when he calls her wench, reminds me of InuYasha, and this mystery guy, and on top of that the Inu no Tashio's reaction...Ummm, intresting lol. I will be waiting for your updates, and I wish you good luck on your promotion!-HCDK
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 15:26 CDT
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I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! and take as much time you need
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 22:16 CDT
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Umm, there is something wrong with chapter..I think 26 or 25, they are the same...I was reading chapter 26 and then boom it became chapter 25....So can you please fix it because I dont want to start 27 w/o knowing what happened in 26! I love this story!!!!!-HCDK
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 23:14 CDT
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Thank you for telling me the name of this fic. I knew it was something like that, I kept on serching the words, 'Choui,' snd nothing ever came up. So I'm happy that I was atleaset close to getting the name right. I'm so happy to see all of the updates, so I guess that means I have a lot of reading to do! And Yes!! Pictures, that is going to be totally awesome!!! Well, I am going to start reading and I will review when I', done, but it might take time considering that it is 11:10 and I have to wake at 5 in the morning, for Chemistry.(I hate that class!!), and then I have an interview, so it might take me a couple of days, but I should review by the weekend. It is so hectic for me at the end of the year, considering I am in honors, and also affiliated in 8 different clubs/organizations, and my list is still growing, I might not graduate top of my class, but I know I'm going to get a good scholarship to college...Well enough of me talking! Your great, and I love this fic!-HCDK
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