| "Chou Shoki I: Learning from Yesterday" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this chapter before, and i still like it. although i was wondering why it said new when you haven't updated. well i hope that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this chapter before, and i still like it. although i was wondering why it said new when you haven't updated. well i hope that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't stop updating! I love your story, I check my email everyday to see if there is a new chapter posted. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lady Black On: May 11, 2008 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just as I said in the other places I let you review... I just finished reading your fic and I have to say that I loved it! I read in this week all the chapters you've posted until now. I like very much your way of writting and how the characters develop. And is amazing how you describe some parts of the Japan history. Even if I found some mistakes in you japanese expresions... I still like very much your fic. I hope you keep posting it, because I want to read the three parts of the trilogy! ^_~ And if you decided to post just in one of the sites you actually post... please, let us know where! ^^
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Title: sweetkijo
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you!! Thank You!! Thank You, for taking the time to write this story. Im shamed that I aint brought my butt in here to review before.**bows in shame** Dont quit writing though just for some of us lowsy lasy readers. Usually I always review and am kinda shocked that I havnt til now. So tis gonna change. I really am enjoying this tale. You write very well and very discriptive. Not to mention you always keep the story very interesting. But did a chapter get left out? I noticed that one is a repeat and then one goes from one area to another. Hence where they are on the beach and she says she won. But then nothing about what happened. But no matter, the story is well written. I cant believe he marked her, and she is soooooo in denial. If she doesnt let him in what will he do?? And I hate her father, what an ass. Hiro is so sweet! But nobody is as hot as Sesshy. lol. Til next time take care! Oh and be careful in your lab! = )
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is my fist time falling apon this gem hidden in a bunch of stories! i love it! However, i noticed that some of your words are spcial characters... and that chapter 24 and 25 are the same.... just thought that you would like to know that tidbit of information. I really hope that you continue and as i will continue to review if you don't until you do continue with this story, just like i do with 'This mess we're in' which is another story that is absolutely my favorte! you must read it, i think that you will enjoy it. although it isn't finished. Well i hope that i see another chapter, or be warned i will annoy you until i see another chapter. i am good at that! Infinite Silence... AKA Ninja Girl~
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 00:21 CDT
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Yay! I just finished reading what you have so far and I love it!!! I cant wait untilyou update next. So please update as soon as possible...I'll be waiting!^_^-HCDK
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 22:55 CDT
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Hey, its me again... I just want to ask you, what do the symboln ― stand for.... Its kind of confusing to me....-HCDK
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 21:43 CDT
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Hi, I just started reading your fic today and was just stopping to tell you that I like it so far. I think that this story will be really different from the rest of the S/K fics, not in a bad way. I cant wait to see what you have in store for us!!!! Keep up the good work!-HCDK
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 23:00 CDT
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Please update soon!! I love your story, and a couple of snot nosed midgets that are still wet behind the ears should not get to you. I've been checking my email everyday to see if you've updated and when I checked it today I was so happy but then disappointed. So please update soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Daniel 79 On: April 05, 2008 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A well done work that i hope to see more of soon. Overall one of the most intresting stories i have read.
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever (not logged on) On: March 30, 2008 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it was very confusing for me in the beginning but i'm liking it now. keep going. it's really good and i can't wait to see what happens. would you be ok with it if i drew a picture of Ujio or something?let me know and i'll do it on my deviantart account. keep it up and update soon please.
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