| "Chou Shoki I: Learning from Yesterday" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: lil_one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 15:42 CDT
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I'm not a very big kag/sess fan... but this story is amazing. i just dont understand why i havent seen it before!!! I found it and read chapter one though chapter 31 in two days.... which is quiet hard since i have a job and school lol keep up the great work... cant wait till the next update!
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Reviewed By: Half Kat Demon Kagome On: June 29, 2008 22:15 CDT
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I really liked this chapter, I think that this is my favorite chapter yet. Kagome and Sesshoumaru opening up to each other, Lana acting like a mother towards Kagome and giving her, her approval, to just everything! It was great!!! And I am so sorry that I haven't reviewed in like forever or read, but I was on a trip with my uncle and auntie to Jamaica and when I got back I was so busy reading the Twilight series with my friends that It took like a month. So I'm so sorry, but I still ove this fic. It's totally awesome. Well, I hope you update soon-HCDK(Sorry once again, I forgot to log on.) This is so not my day-.-
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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: June 23, 2008 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good!!! I honestly think it's one of the best stories I've read inj almosst a year because you have an interesting plot and it's original so plz update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! There getting closer! How cute!! I do agree with the others that the dreams are confusing and it does sound like inuyash. I love that he was there in the storm with her it was so cute!! I can't wait for the next chapter! NO hurry but still can't wait for it!!! lUV ya lots!!
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Reviewed By: makumba-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i have just read through these 30 sum chapters and i a thoroughly impressed. i sometimes get confused with the dreams because it sounds like inuyasha talking, and someone has probably said this already. But i am in love with this fic. i have sat for hours trying to get these chapters done, and i am so excited to read more! i am also impressed with how well you write. very few grammatical errors, i have seen a few but none that would throw off my reading, and i look forward to your updates!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot!! She finally admitted it. She is smitten with our Sesshy! Oh yes! I wonder if he will still show at the ceremony. I bet he watches her, lol. I am glad to see that she is finally warming up to him and that when given the chance he didnt back away from her and her question to him, instead he opened his heart and trusted her with his fears. That was an important moment for both of them. However I am a little nervous about the mystery man. I am pretty sure who he is, just not his role in this whole thing. I will wait and see. Glad to have gotten more to read from you. Thanks for the update, I appreciate it more than you know. Until next time, you take care.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 11:00 CDT
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PLEASE DON'T TAKE AWAY THE STORY!!!!!!!! I REALLY DON'T THINK ITS A GOOD IDEA FOR U TO TAKE AWAY A GOOD STORY AS THIS I LOVE THIS STORY! oh please update soon so i know not only what happens but ur answer!!!!!!!!!! :'(
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't cancel this story is great and i love reading it! You have an fantasic imagination and i can't wait to read more. I truly love this story from the beginning. I can't wait to read more and see what happens next. I love kagomes character and Sesshomarus there like the opposite together but fit perfectly for another. I understand that you will not be able to update as much but take as long as you want i can wait! I can't wait to hear more! Dah88
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Reviewed By: eriste [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't take this story off of mediaminer! It is a wonderful story, and it would be sorely missed if you removed it. I hope you update soon, and if you do decide to remove it, please provide a link to where ever it will be posted.
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**2nd review**OMG....I just thunk it!! Did Kags mother and Sess's father have an affair and a baby was born but that baby was taken away and hidden and that baby is Inuyasha?? Sess's father doesnt know if it was a boy or girl therefor has to make sure Kags isnt his daughter?? Do you see what your story is doing to me?? Lmao...uggg, I need a drink. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, So here I am again!! Lol. Your story just got so much more interesting. Is the man she met her brother?? Is he alive after all this time?? Her father, is he really her father? Is Sesshomaru's father concerned that they may be related? Is that what he is trying to figure out? Man my brain is on overload trying to figure it all out. Hmm, tis very interesting. Is Kagome transforming when Sess finds her?? If I knew what the Butterfly effect was, maybe I would understand. Lol, see I do read your author notes. Thanks for the update and congrats on the promotion, those are always nice. Take care.
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 23:41 CDT
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Hey! I just finished reading your updates, it really good, I'm trying to figure out who that guy is Kagome was talking to. Is InuYasha going to be in this fic, because the guy in her dreams when he calls her wench, reminds me of InuYasha, and this mystery guy, and on top of that the Inu no Tashio's reaction...Ummm, intresting lol. I will be waiting for your updates, and I wish you good luck on your promotion!-HCDK
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 15:26 CDT
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I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! and take as much time you need
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 22:16 CDT
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Umm, there is something wrong with chapter..I think 26 or 25, they are the same...I was reading chapter 26 and then boom it became chapter 25....So can you please fix it because I dont want to start 27 w/o knowing what happened in 26! I love this story!!!!!-HCDK
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 23:14 CDT
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Thank you for telling me the name of this fic. I knew it was something like that, I kept on serching the words, 'Choui,' snd nothing ever came up. So I'm happy that I was atleaset close to getting the name right. I'm so happy to see all of the updates, so I guess that means I have a lot of reading to do! And Yes!! Pictures, that is going to be totally awesome!!! Well, I am going to start reading and I will review when I', done, but it might take time considering that it is 11:10 and I have to wake at 5 in the morning, for Chemistry.(I hate that class!!), and then I have an interview, so it might take me a couple of days, but I should review by the weekend. It is so hectic for me at the end of the year, considering I am in honors, and also affiliated in 8 different clubs/organizations, and my list is still growing, I might not graduate top of my class, but I know I'm going to get a good scholarship to college...Well enough of me talking! Your great, and I love this fic!-HCDK
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