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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! This part of the movie was my favorite and you wrote it perfectly. Glad to see you're back! Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 {not signed in} On: April 27, 2008 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. but i think i've said that enough times for you to realize i mean it =]] keep writing, and keep those updates coming as fast as you possibly can! THANK YOU! =D
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Reviewed By: angelblaze2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 00:04 CDT
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Wow, I'm quite surprised that Kikyo had her and Inu's daughter take on quite the task. But then again it seems she has the guts to take it one! Keep on going!!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Little Kagome is going to have her work cut out for her! Not only is there going to be trust issues between Kags and Inu, I'll bet she'll feel some obligation to Kouga and that he is the safer choice since he seems to loves her. Kags won't feel like second choice with Kouga. Also, even if little Kagome gets Kags 'on board' Inuyasha is still grieving for Kikyo and seems would be a difficult path to get him to realize a romantic love for Kags. No matter what...some interesting things to come!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Should be fun when Inu finds out what his daughter, and her co-conspirators, have been up to, hehe. And funny on how the 'fates' aren't on Koga's side. Lol. While I do like your story, might I suggest maybe getting a beta for it. One could help pick out any errors you overlook when writing. Please don't take it as a flame, is just a suggestion. I think the story is a good one. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad that Kagome has had a successful life, even though she was without Inuyasha. But, just like him, it seems that she's felt empty. Kouga seems like a good guy, if more than a bit domineering. But, Kagome is clearly just settling for him. And now that little Kagome will finally get to meet her dad's best friend at the camp, let the game begin. Great story.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so kagome higurashi has entered the scene... seems that little kagome has some divine interventions on her side... glad that sango helped... wonder what the reactions will be when they meet... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Qi On: April 25, 2008 04:33 CDT
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I'm kind of disappointed that Kagome isn't finding any measure of happiness with Koga. It's going to make for a very unequal relationship when Inuyasha comes back into the picture. He's going to have loved and adored someone else, been with her physically, and had a child with her. That's going to cause Kagome to have significant trust issues if she's never loved anyone else. Plus, it sounds like you might be trying to keep her character virginal, and to be blunt, that's going to make things even more complicated emotionally for her. My suggestion would be to give her a past love interest besides Inuyasha that didn't work out (before meeting Koga) or to make her hold genuine affection/adoration for Koga. Plus, I would definitely give Kagome sexual experience before you have her hook up with Inuyasha. On a different note, you might want to consider getting a beta reader. There are some errors that need fixing and a beta would catch those. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I'm enjoying the plotline quite a bit. ;) Best of luck!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update! I'm curious though, will there be any Sango/Miroku interaction in this? ~Amber
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Reviewed By: keiko.chan On: April 24, 2008 15:54 CDT
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I love this movie. I thought I was just being an idiot when I noticed the similarities at the beginning of your story, but thank God the A/N cleared that up. LOL. Even though it's based on KKHH, and the actors in that movie have their own style, you managed to portray each character as themselves, and not the same as the actors. It's very commendable. I've always thought of doing a fic based on a Bollywood movie, however the plots can get dramatic and complicated, so I backed off. KKHH is a classic, and it's not that complicated, so congrats on finding a suitable film. I really have enjoyed the story so far. And, even though I already know the ending and the rest of the story, I look forward to reading the rest! ~KC.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [not logged in] On: April 22, 2008 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! I've been looking for this update!!=]] update again as soon as POSSIBLE! =] thanks! PLEASE HURRY! =] lmao -Sky
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first came across this I admit I was dubious at how this was going to go as I'm not a Kikyo fan, but am all for giving anything a chance, so I must say am very pleasantly surprised. Love the story and how its coming along thus far. Should be interesting on how an eight yr. old goes bout her task of match making. Good story. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: fudge On: April 22, 2008 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
geez! and this is where the roller coaster begins! It makes you wonder what happened to kagome... Hope the next chapter comes up soon!!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Fantastic story! I've rarely read a story that is pro Kikyo and Kagome. I usually don't like Kikyo but even though she 'won out' over Kagome she never wanted to hurt her and was concerned about hurting Inu & Kags' relationship. You really made her character someone to admire. Now there's so much suspense for me about Kagome. What has the last 10 years or so brought her? Did she marry? Does she have kids of her own? Is she happy or bitter? How will she react to hearing from Inuyasha's daughter? Surely it won't be so easy to get back into her life after Inuyasha unknowingly broke her heart. Looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 00:45 CDT
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aww this is really tugging at my heartstrings. I can't wait to see what happens next :) Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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