| "Something Happens..." Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: moonkiss22 On: April 13, 2008 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IM HOOK! Please post as soon as you can and promise to finish the story.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 11:17 CDT
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*wipes eyes* the only other answer would have been polygamy and i think that is against the law in japan and most other industrialized nations, nor is it morally acceptable. it is interesting how one doesn't see the monster staring them in the eye, something so obvious, and who's to say she hasn't changed considerably after her heart had been unknowingly ripped out and stomped on by two people she believed to know her and care about her. one would think that at least since kikyo had realized that kagome loved yash and deep down she also knew he loved kagome she would have discouraged his interest before she fell for him... iknow, i have a rather cynical view of things but i would never have done it (my gf liked a guy who liked me and i pushed him away, neither of us ended up with him, we still have our friendship and both of us are happily married). i am enjoying this and eagerly anticipate more. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 10:00 CDT
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GREAT chapter. The flashbacks were really well-done and set-up the plot very well. I enjoyed the insight into all three of the characters. Kagome's situation was beyond painful. I can only imagine what that must be like. And I really like the role you made for Kikyo....even if she is doing it on paper from the grave. Too often, she's seen as this evil gargoyle who's out to steal Inuyasha from Kagome (and I'm gulity of seeing her that way myself sometimes since I'm staunchly Inu/Kag), but she is so much more than that. And presenting her this way allows you to see it. I can't wait to see what little Kagome plans to help her dad. This is going to be so good. It already is!
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Title: where is the other chapter
Reviewed By: catpanther [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay i like. where is the other chapter i wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... quite sad how older kagome left... inuyasha was really clueless back then... wonder how young kagome will find kagome higurashi... will she ask for help?... but from who?... will she tell or show her father about the letter from kikyo and the task... things are getting interesting... where is the older kagome now... what happened to her... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 00:20 CDT
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this chapter was so very sad, and stupid inuyasha didnt even realize what was going on. i wonder if kikyo ever knew that he practiced his proposal on kagome?
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tho am not one for Kikyo, this am very good. Got me hooked! Hehe. Now what will Lil Kags do. Should be interesting to find out. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you do with the characters! Their characterization is awesome. It'd be interesting to see how little Kagome plans on hooking up her father with big kaggie...but entrusting a duty like that to an eight year old? I would've thought a twelve year old or something would've been better but again...that just makes it all the more interesting. Can't wait to see what happens! ~Amber :)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 05:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anothr good chapter. Even though I'm a staunch Inu/Kag fan, I am enjoying all this background information with Kikyo. I'lll definitely be looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems that kikyo wants her daughter to know about kagome her namesake... but why?... wonder what happened to them long ago... why was kikyo saying sorry to inuyasha before she died... how will the daughter get to meet kagome higurashi?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful start. I look forward to seeing where you go with htis.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [not logged in] On: March 28, 2008 15:04 CDT
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ooh. this is getting good. i really like it. update soon. =]
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... looking forward to the coming chapters... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 12:56 CDT
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hmm, interesting, i was moved. . . i'm going to have to find the original movie if it is as good as you say, i only hope if i find it, it has english subs. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 18:58 CDT
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...i must admit, this is one of the most touching first chapters i have read in quite some time. that was hard to type, only because i have been a strong kagomeXinuyasha believer since the very beginning. when he thought kikyo, i was so tempted to JUST NOT READ, but my gawd, i'm so glad i did. you are skilled in the way you place emotions and feelings into your story. i think that i'll come back to this story and read it everytime there's an update, even if it DID start with KIKYOxINUYASHA (^-^). i'm excited to read the rest, and am curious on how you'll make this trun out. update ASAP. thank you! =]]
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