| "To See the Truth in Each Other" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really good, but you are going to let Kaogme fight right?
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Reviewed By: Kotori-chan On: May 20, 2008 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this is really good. Love the plot so far, very interesting and unique. You have a really good idea going here. My only critique is that the chapters are too short. The chapters end too soon and I wanna read more! xD Anyways, hope you decide to keep going with this. I really like it!
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Reviewed By: Kittenn1011 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 08:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is actually really good. I like it can't wait for the next update!
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 19:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
i hope you continue to write on this story. it seems like a great start...
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Reviewed By: hieiz babeolicious baby On: March 25, 2008 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i hope you continue this seems to be an interesting way to go about writting a story and if you'd please UPDATE
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 23:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting concept. Most writers who do the "they each don't know what the other is up to" don't go so far as married with a family on the way. I like it. My only concern is that you flew it on the paper & uploaded it as little more than a plot synopsis, and may never actually get into the story itself. Hope you do, though.
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