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"The Faithful One" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 05, 2008 23:44 CDT
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Oooh. Good one. At first I didn't understand why Vegeta didn't realize she was being raped, or why she didn't tell him sooner. But then I realized that Vegeta took off immediately and they didn't set eyes on each other for 2 years. It was also a nice touch that he was secretly visiting Trunks. As soon as you said that Trunks never mentioned his father to anyone, I went "ahah!" The vengence of leaving Yamcha alive and in perpetual fear was very creative.

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