| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Title: VXB is fun again
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. I am really liking the pace you're developing and the balance of action and dialogue. You really put me right there with their 'lime on'. As always please keep going.
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Title: Great chapter!!
Reviewed By: Ally92 On: July 25, 2008 13:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 11:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A 10 for everything. Fuck im so nervous lol
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Reviewed By: earlschibiangel On: July 22, 2008 21:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice. i liked this one.
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Title: OOH SO HOT!!!!!!
Reviewed By: lefemevegeta On: July 22, 2008 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I once again can't wait for the next chapter. You had way to many steamy moments in this chapter that has me sweating and drooling. I want to go on a date with Vegeta too. Can you arrange that????? Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: TexRLos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this story is so great, seriously i'm loving it! its different from all other ffs i've read...im sure a lot of people feel the same way :) don't take too long to update, i really wanna read the next chapter ! xoxo
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Title: Yeahhhh!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 05:52 PDT
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Gosh, thanks so much for updating! Lots of funny moments in this chapter, I laughed my ass off when Vegeta made that kid's ice cream explode. A lot of hot steamy all-most-there moments too... I like how you put a spin on Bulma and Vegeta 'making out'...which builds up to tangy chapter 10. Oh my gosh, I don't think I can 't wait too long, please hurry!
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Title: Amazed!!
Reviewed By: The_Red_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 07:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply extraordinary! I loved the latest chapter! You writing style is almost lyrical, i love it! The way you relate Bulma and Vegeta's relationship is incredible, i've only read a handful of stories that have portrayed their relationship so well. Keep up the good work and please update as soon as possible!!
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Title: Luvin it!!!!!!
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: July 13, 2008 09:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is fabulous. The dinner scene was well thought out and had me emotionally attached. I can't wait to see where Vegeta will take Bulma. Update real soon plez.
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Title: This is the best fic I have read in the past 3 years
Reviewed By: Ally92 On: July 06, 2008 19:10 PDT
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Woo hoo!! Can not wait for the next chapter. Awesome story!!
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Reviewed By: keleos On: July 05, 2008 20:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
His strong hands grabbed her delicately, pressing her against him and embellishing her in the soft indigo of his power. They remained like that for a few seconds, merely hovering like a soft blue star in the middle of the night, their heartbeats struggling to pound in unison .... I am speechless, this is so beautiful! I love the character interaction!! So IC!!! + I love your style AAAAAAAAAAAnd.... I wonder where they're going now? (metaphorically speaking too LOL) >>> Thank you so much for updating!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 00:11 PDT
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Wow, this was so intense. You are really something, I wonder how you get to make the story this amazing. Please continue!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoultely LOVE this story!! Bulma and Vegeta have the most intersting relationship on DBZ and you have portrayed that sooo well! Cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Adg06 On: July 03, 2008 12:10 PDT
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chapter 8= absolute greatness =)
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Reviewed By: Annaxx On: July 03, 2008 11:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
loooved it, please dont take long to update :)
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