| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 04:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! That was so intense. So sexy, and so heavy too. I don't know what it is about your writing style that just draws me in completely. Your writing is perfection! I loved the bit at the end with Kami. The last few paragraphs with Enma and Kami and Baba were beautiful, and very true. You did another great job, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: keleos On: September 22, 2008 02:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... just... WOW! I am amazed, you're brillant!! I don't think I've ever read a fic such as this one!! *is speechless* GREAT JOB"" I am really looking forward to the next chapters!!!
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: September 20, 2008 13:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you describe her aching for him. And how she describes her desire in such a sexy and seductive way. Very hot!
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Reviewed By: amy22 On: September 16, 2008 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This keeps getting better and better! And HOTTER too!! HOW I LOVE/HATE CLIFFHANGERS!! XD Great job, as usual!!
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Title: Well written
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: September 14, 2008 11:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for posting this chapter. Please post the next chapter ASAP!!!!! Your fans can't wait a whole month for the next update. We want to know what else our twisted Bulma has in store for our Vegeta. And we definitly can't wait to see how Vegeta will respond to this controlled situation. My email is janellab2k@yahoo.com, I would love to know when you post your chapters. Hope to read soon.......Can't wait!!! Can't wait!! Can't wait!!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: September 14, 2008 05:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVED this chapter!!!! I was sooo good and very unexpected at the beginnng i was trying to figure out what was going on. anyway I loved it and cant wait for more! >_
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 01:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This is an incredible story! It's so sexy and so funny, I am addicted! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 14:52 PDT
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I hope you post chapter 11 soon. I just read your entire story so far and I really like it. I cant wait to see what Vegetas reaction is going to be once he is free from his restraints. So PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 21:13 PDT
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Ooo, I'm glad that the next part is already written. I can't wait to see how it goes from here and why Bulma has ended up in the predicament at the beginning. Vegeta definitely needs a little role reversal for a change. Nice work, can't wait 'til you post the next part.
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Reviewed By: annna On: September 08, 2008 09:21 PDT
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greeat :pp updatee it! it had been so long since you last updated i thought you gave up:(
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Title: Yes!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 05:57 PDT
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This has bound to be the most bizzare chapter ever!!! I mean Bulma is off her rocker! What would want her to do this to him? Doesn't she know she's going to PAY when he gets out of thoese restraints? Deadly game she's playing, indeed. But please, PLEASE give us chapter eleven. I'm simply dying to see what's going to happen next! I'm dying to read some well written fanfiction, and honey, you really REALLY have talent! You turn a phrase so well! And I'm not bullshitting you so you can post chapter 11, either. This is the honest truth. Thanks for making BV alive again! Now PLEASE POST CHATPER ELEVEN!!!! @_@
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 11:31 PDT
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UPDATE SOON! I'm going to bug you quite often with these senseless reviews until I get an update!!! @_@
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 15:38 PDT
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I need a chapter update REALLY soon. :D
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Reviewed By: Adg06 On: August 22, 2008 09:14 PDT
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please update. . .
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Title: OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!
Reviewed By: keleos On: August 04, 2008 15:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh good Lord that was the hottest thing I've ever read!! THE TENSION OMG THE TENSION!! *fans herself* weeeelll, I will need a couple of hours days to recover... Thank you so much for writing this, and as usual, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!
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