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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chapter
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 17:18 CDT
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I want....Sesshoumaru. Excellent characterization once again. Miroku's reaction to being hit was unique and frankly, a refreshing change. Good luck as you continue!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 16:46 CDT
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I love this story. I think you are witty and also have an intriguing plot. Good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty at hell (School) On: June 10, 2008 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh god... this is so good... you know I don't think I can read the next one at school...
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 22:19 CDT
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Hahaha oh poor Sesshoumaru. If only he would learn that he should listen to Miroku and not treat Kagome that way! :] This story's so hilarious, I can't wait for the next chapter! (And TSNNAM!)
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops! I thought my chapter numbers sounded a little off. Oh well, hopefully you still understood everything. I loved the Sesshoumaru & Miroku bantering in this chapter, it's definitely a very interesting comedic relief to what I'm sure will be a dramatic coming with Kagome's dinner. Thanks for clearing that up with me about Naraku being the hanyou.. I should have realized that haha. One of these days I'm going to try my hand at writing a story and try to make Kagome into a hanyou or demon to get Sesshoumaru's attention: I just think that sounds so interesting! ;] I agree with you about being on Miroku's side, he just wants some female attention and I think he gets hit and knocked unconscious a little too many times. Maybe eventually in the manga and/or the anime (if they decide to continue it) Sango will grow up and realize that she needs to start acting like a woman around him. Who knows. Anyway, great work on this chapter - hopefully I can catch up to where you're at now soon! :]
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 18:17 CDT
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You know, I just love your quotes at the beginning of every chapter. How ever did you find so many about TEA, of all things? Chapter 6: "Hanyou filth"? Does that mean Kagome is a hanyou in this story? Ooh! I love stories that throw something like that into the mix! - That kiss between Sango and Miroku was so cute. She just can't deny him. :] But it will do him good to be hit by SOMETHING, since her other weapons aren't around in this story. - And Sesshoumaru's pants ripping? Hahahaha! - I wonder what the book is really for. So many questions! Chapter 7: Oh good, Miroku deserves to be hit by Sango after kissing her out of the blue like that. A hilarious scene to come, I'm quite sure. - I wonder when Sesshoumaru will let Kagome see his real form. I would think he hated to conceal himself all the time like he must have to do. - Kagome is friends with Naraku? Uh oh! That can only be bad news; I hope he doesn't do anything to hurt her. But I'm sure jealous Sesshoumaru will be there to protect her. :] - Aww they're kissing! How cute :D
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: May 27, 2008 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*sung in a little sing-song voice* Love it Love it Love it! Just as our reviews are fuel, your story is my fuel. I am totally arse-over-tea-kettle for this fic. *laughs at own pun* I can't wait for the next enstallment. There is a lot of sexual tension in this, and I love it. *laughs evilly* I hope you throw these two into more situations that are just as frustrating for them... ^-^ Keep it comin! am lovin your work Chao InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru has a way with women doesn't he...
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: May 27, 2008 02:11 CDT
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loved this chapter and the last one too! good story so far! yay for kagome not just giving in because of good kissing skills! I love "peace treaty" too!!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: May 26, 2008 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hmmm... I wonder if Kags is a hanyou and she doesn't know and it is hidden until the time is right? maybe that is why Sess seems so familiar...???? hehe I hope so...lol happy writings.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
leading us on with the lemon part!!! I was wonder how you get going to get a real lemon in that.... it really want just a little bit of juice... and perverted Miroku....
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:] I loved the shower scene! You can totally tell there's chemistry starting to happen between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I wonder why she left running so fast? And is Naraku evil in this story too? Can't wait for the next installment! :]
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh.. this was wonderful... do not drink and read this in front of your computer... I think I would have killed it... calling Sango a Dyke... (although I can understand why...)
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh a shower scene! I can only imagine how Sesshoumaru is going to embarrass Kagome with this one. And I'm hoping for some more Miroku & Sango interaction too - it's really unique how you're portraying them!
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