| "The Art of Tea" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru has a way with women doesn't he...
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: May 27, 2008 02:11 CDT
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loved this chapter and the last one too! good story so far! yay for kagome not just giving in because of good kissing skills! I love "peace treaty" too!!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: May 26, 2008 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hmmm... I wonder if Kags is a hanyou and she doesn't know and it is hidden until the time is right? maybe that is why Sess seems so familiar...???? hehe I hope so...lol happy writings.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
leading us on with the lemon part!!! I was wonder how you get going to get a real lemon in that.... it really want just a little bit of juice... and perverted Miroku....
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:] I loved the shower scene! You can totally tell there's chemistry starting to happen between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I wonder why she left running so fast? And is Naraku evil in this story too? Can't wait for the next installment! :]
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh.. this was wonderful... do not drink and read this in front of your computer... I think I would have killed it... calling Sango a Dyke... (although I can understand why...)
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh a shower scene! I can only imagine how Sesshoumaru is going to embarrass Kagome with this one. And I'm hoping for some more Miroku & Sango interaction too - it's really unique how you're portraying them!
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha, I can't wait to find out Sesshoumaru's reaction to being doused with water that early on a Saturday morning! I wonder if he was going to visit Kagome? Hmm.. :]
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: May 15, 2008 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am so loving this story! I wonder if or when the rest of the crowd shows up. Is shippou a youkai in this and does kags know? So many questions to ask but I will wait and let the story unfold. I am looking forward to how and where you will move this story... can't wait! Ja Ne! InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ending so soon????? Nooooooo!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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First impressions? I was grinning like an idiot through this entire chapter. The last line got me, and I finally laughed out loud. One of them is fire and the other kerosene, and please don't ask which is which because it's impossible to say. Describing the take tambos as "bamboo fireflies" is genius. This story is simply gravity.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love the details you present in this work so far. The setting is so well described I can "see" and "smell" and dare I say, "feel" the tea house. It is a living breathing intity, and things like this are fun to read. I must admit, it pained me to "see" Sesshoumaru crush the monarch, even if it is perfectly within his character to do so.
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Reviewed By: The_Red_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 21:15 CDT
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So far i like this story. For one thing, you really captured Seshoumaru's personality and the story is very original. I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: emmaren [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am looking forward to this story. You seem to always be able to capture Sesshoumaru's arogance with realism and depth. Kagome's flare and fighting personality is never missing. I also really like the concept for their acquaintance. It puts them in the an interesting dynamic that has a lot of flexiblity. Emily
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