| "The Art of Tea" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: August 01, 2008 19:55 CDT
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Ahhh the butterfly is now explained. I am still a little fuzzy as to what Kagome understood about Sesshoumaru when she caught on to the butterfly meaning. Hmmm, maybe I need to read it again. I also found Sango's studio apt. to be strangely appealing. In any case, I enjoyed this chapter. Good luck with the next.
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Reviewed By: HamsterBattalionCommander [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read chapter 13B, and all I can think of to say is 'Wow.' I think I would have fainted too. I sure wish I could put maybe 11 or 12 for Enjoyment Factor.
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 22:36 CDT
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I am enjoying the exchanges between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. It appears they are attracted to each other, but as much as Sesshoumaru has declared she will be his concubine, even he is having second thoughts. Kagome seems to be attracted to Naraku and Sesshoumaru. I was surprised when you mentioned at the end of this last chapter that they had only known each other two days. Did I misinterpret that? Somehow I though much more time had passed, with many tea ceremonies.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: July 23, 2008 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HA! I loved the A/n at the end of this chapter... You my dear author may be Evil personified but the last time I looked up your name in my fanfiction encyclopedia in my mountain estate...(ahem...is the sarcasm a bit too much?) *grin...* but you do evil really well with a picture of you beside the description. Killing me softly with these words... If you didn't, then the stories would not be as entertaining or as funky fresh... LOV IT! Congrats and hope to see more from you in the future! Chao bella! InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 20:50 CDT
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AAAAAAAAH you stopped right when I was getting ready for some action! *pout* Fine. Have it your way. I suppose you have a brilliant and delicious plan in your blessed author head. *giggle* Good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty(falling asleep at hell) On: July 22, 2008 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder If I should be even readin gthis at school, bu then again it didnt get too ruanchy...
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 16:18 CDT
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AAAAAAAAAH SO CUTE! Rin and Sesshoumaru are so cute together. I just want to hug him. I am curious to how this will go. Are Kagura and Inuyasha going to hook up? I've never seen that match before. In any case, good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chapter
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 17:18 CDT
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I want....Sesshoumaru. Excellent characterization once again. Miroku's reaction to being hit was unique and frankly, a refreshing change. Good luck as you continue!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 16:46 CDT
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I love this story. I think you are witty and also have an intriguing plot. Good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty at hell (School) On: June 10, 2008 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh god... this is so good... you know I don't think I can read the next one at school...
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 22:19 CDT
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Hahaha oh poor Sesshoumaru. If only he would learn that he should listen to Miroku and not treat Kagome that way! :] This story's so hilarious, I can't wait for the next chapter! (And TSNNAM!)
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops! I thought my chapter numbers sounded a little off. Oh well, hopefully you still understood everything. I loved the Sesshoumaru & Miroku bantering in this chapter, it's definitely a very interesting comedic relief to what I'm sure will be a dramatic coming with Kagome's dinner. Thanks for clearing that up with me about Naraku being the hanyou.. I should have realized that haha. One of these days I'm going to try my hand at writing a story and try to make Kagome into a hanyou or demon to get Sesshoumaru's attention: I just think that sounds so interesting! ;] I agree with you about being on Miroku's side, he just wants some female attention and I think he gets hit and knocked unconscious a little too many times. Maybe eventually in the manga and/or the anime (if they decide to continue it) Sango will grow up and realize that she needs to start acting like a woman around him. Who knows. Anyway, great work on this chapter - hopefully I can catch up to where you're at now soon! :]
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 18:17 CDT
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You know, I just love your quotes at the beginning of every chapter. How ever did you find so many about TEA, of all things? Chapter 6: "Hanyou filth"? Does that mean Kagome is a hanyou in this story? Ooh! I love stories that throw something like that into the mix! - That kiss between Sango and Miroku was so cute. She just can't deny him. :] But it will do him good to be hit by SOMETHING, since her other weapons aren't around in this story. - And Sesshoumaru's pants ripping? Hahahaha! - I wonder what the book is really for. So many questions! Chapter 7: Oh good, Miroku deserves to be hit by Sango after kissing her out of the blue like that. A hilarious scene to come, I'm quite sure. - I wonder when Sesshoumaru will let Kagome see his real form. I would think he hated to conceal himself all the time like he must have to do. - Kagome is friends with Naraku? Uh oh! That can only be bad news; I hope he doesn't do anything to hurt her. But I'm sure jealous Sesshoumaru will be there to protect her. :] - Aww they're kissing! How cute :D
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: May 27, 2008 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*sung in a little sing-song voice* Love it Love it Love it! Just as our reviews are fuel, your story is my fuel. I am totally arse-over-tea-kettle for this fic. *laughs at own pun* I can't wait for the next enstallment. There is a lot of sexual tension in this, and I love it. *laughs evilly* I hope you throw these two into more situations that are just as frustrating for them... ^-^ Keep it comin! am lovin your work Chao InuPriestess
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