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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2010 03:48 CDT
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the story is great so far! I can't wait for the next chapter and i cant wait to see what miroku and shessomaru will do once they find rin and sango or if inuyasha and kagome will meet and remember each other. update soon please.
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Reviewed By: babypeenats On: May 22, 2010 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful first chapter! I always loved reading storied about little kagome and inu growing up. This is a wonderful story, your style of writing is spectacular! This has the potential to be a great story; I cant wait to read the rest.
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2010 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow absolutely love it. Excellent writing and story line. Looking forward to next update.
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2010 23:58 CDT
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YaY! You're back! Such a great concept and so well written too. I had to re-read the older chapters to refresh my memory and everything flows loverly. I liked how you clearly illustrated the hopes and dreams and future plans of each of the girls just before they are nabbed. Makes it all that much more devastating for them when they wake to find themselves slaves. Mwahahahah.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2010 23:08 CDT
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*\o/* YOU'RE BACK!! *\o/* nicely done! i was thinking that kagome was going to have an epiphany there in the park when renkotsu came up. what a way to grab the girls. one hopes they threw a sheet on sango if they wanted to remove her from her building without someone questioning them. poor rin, i assume 'S' is sesshoumaru. i had to read it over to refresh my memory and it did seem slightly different, more detail? ♥
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Reviewed By: chichers On: October 19, 2008 18:07 CDT
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*pouts* Please don't stop now! I really really like this story and i would love you forever if you continued this stroy. So pretty please update soon?
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 23:50 CDT
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Wow. This is off to a great start. Don't bail, dammit.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 17:51 CDT
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the thing about characterizations in an a.u. setting is that one can only make an educated guess as to how a person would act in any given circumstance (even in canon settings). a character is what the author perceives of them, their state of mind, mood, emotional and hormonal condition. i have enjoyed your depictions of the different characters and given their settings their actions are apropos. . . you writing is eloquent, descriptive and a pleasure to read. the story is intriguing and captivating. i shall be watching eagerly for you to get a new keyboard and your (hopefully) prompt update. (try pulling the 'w' key and cleaning around the base of it with a q-tip) ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word describes my feelings on this story, "Awesome!" I do have some, okay, many questions but I'm sure I'll find out my answers eventually. The one I have right now is, "Who is Rin's benefactor?" Is it Sesshomaru? Is it someone else? Someone we know or an entirely new character? Has Rin ever met her benefactor? If she hasn't then it could be Sesshomaru and his reading of an article on Rin and his violent reaction to Inuyasha seeing it means their is most likely some connection between them but what? And does Sesshomaru possess Tenseiga in your story? Anyway, great story and I hope you update soon! Love, Zach
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 14:37 CDT
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This story has a wonderful storyline started here. I like the intrigue and possible plots that are going on. The history of the Barrier is an interesting take on things. For a while I thought that the Barrier was going to hold the place of the Shikon no Tama, but then you added in the jew shards themselves. I also like that you have Inu "kinda" remembering Kagome, it should lead to a very interesting plot. I look forward to reading more from you. Thanks for writing for us.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: LavenderRose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 22:00 CDT
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Really interesting premise so far...definitely putting this on my Watch List!
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Reviewed By: mouseythegreat On: June 19, 2008 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. The writing reminds me of some of my favorite authors--and you're well on your way to being added to my list. I only noticed a few grammatical errors, but they didn't impede the flow of the story at all. Good luck with the rest of the story, I'll be checking back soon.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 04:52 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is looking to be a really, really interesting story. I am looking forward to following it!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THIS IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER~ PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND I REALLY HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE VERY VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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