| "The Triangle" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very nice. This comes together very well, and this was a fun, steamy read, you could really feel what was going on there. The second half lost a little of my gusto for the piece; For one I was a little put off by the Bulma giving orders thing and Vegita obeying as such, but for all the little things I didn't find satisfying, I can see the significance of it in terms of the piece as a whole, so it's still amazingly good and it brings something unique to the table. Awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Scary Bulma On: August 31, 2009 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D That was amazing! Loved it all.
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Reviewed By: Little Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you!
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 07:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! That was awesome. It's so rare to find quality B/V/G fics, and it will be especially rare now that you've set the bar so high. I've found it's difficult to come across writers who are able to write yaoi and het with equal quality, style, and lemony-goodness. Your B/V fics are awesome, your yaoi fics are awesome, and having both combined into one delicious fic just blows my mind! I really hope you'll write more fics about these three. They deserve it, they've been good! ;) Keep it up, Caprice, you rock!
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Title: AWWWWWWWW
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED it!!! This was o cute hot and amazing!!!!!! I jjust wish it lasted longer!!! i can t wait to read other works by you!
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 17:12 CDT
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Oooo, nice! It's been ages since I had a good B/V/G oneshot to read. Yummy smut, and the equilateral triangle metaphor at the end was lovely. Thanks for the fun fic.^^
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 17:41 CDT
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I'm not usually a fan of stories where Bulma is still in the picture, but this was hot!
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 10:11 CDT
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WOW!!!!! I promised myself I would stay away from smut for erm. many reasons but I had to read this since you wrote it. I don't regret it *huge grin*. Keep up the GREAT work!!!!
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