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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sango and Miroku. I'm glad that Inuyasha found a way to save them both. Oh, the intriques of a harem... especially one filled with clever women. Inuyasha is lucky that his harem is not one of those. If Dalal had been really clever... I don't want to think about it. Great story!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 17:54 EST
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Another great chapter. Your really on a roll.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 16:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things have gotten bad for sango & miroku... and inuyasha hasn't spoke to kagome yet... what is the plan that inuyasha came up with... hope inuyasha will tell kagome, sango & miroku about it though... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 14:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, Miroku did jokingly ask if he could 'borrow' Sango back there, but Inuyasha had figured he wasn't serious, and knew that to concede would be to lose some measure of respect, because it was more cruel to the woman to share a concubine. Not illegal! So...is he going to say now that he had willingly let Miroku 'play' with Sango? That might taint his image in his father's eyes but would certainly save his best friends' lives. Totally worth it! Of course I knew he wouldn't really be upset with his friends for falling in love. If only they had just told him! But of course I'm sure it'll all work out in the end, somehow or another.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 07:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how about "I let Sango free and just forgot to tell anybody" excuse??? lol... great chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 02:54 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad that Inuyasha has thought up of a way out of this for everyone. I knew someone would because Inuyasha can't order the deaths of Miroku and Sango, though I was leaning more toward Kagome coming up with a solution. It makes more sense for Inuyasha to realize and answer though because he is more knowledgeable about the law of the land. I am not surprised that Muna would have tried to implicate Kagome or that she is upset about Dalal's good fortune. I am surprised that Dalal has not thought of the fact that this could backfire onto her being the messenger. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha's solution is.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 20:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now everyone... at least the important characters, are upset!!! lol, great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 16:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the drama (^_^) Grreat chapter!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 16:15 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SOOOOOO glad to see an update. Inuyasha needs to spend some calming time with Kagome and then give Miroku and Sango his blessing to be together. But if Kagome is going to help Sango escape then Inuyasha is going to be so mad at her she will need to fear for herself. I am glad that Inuyasha is seeing through Dalal's pleasure and punishes her too for the "betrayal". I think the best punishment he could give her would be to turn back to Kagome and banish Dalal from his sight. We know that Inuyasha won't execute Sango and Miroku but it should be interesting to see what he does do. Please update soon with the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 12:22 EST
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Poor Kagome... InuYasha, Sango AND Miroku. At least InuYasha's pissed at Dalal... I'd like to see him grab Kagome for the next night, just to piss Dalal off :-) Plus, he really needs to put this into perspective: He hasn't DONE anything with Sango in so long... he should be happy to know his second-favorite concubine is in love and give them his blessings. Abnormal? Maybe, but when has he ever followed the rules before?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 11:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha isn't handling the news quite well... and now kagome found out more about it too... what will happen next... what will inuyasha do?... will kagome do something?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Shadow Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 19:03 EST
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hurray you finally updated and what a good chapter too! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter... a WONDERFUL thing to start my birthday!!!!! (20th of Jan) (well other than just yesterday finding out I got into the University that I wanted to get into... (especially after I took the very expensive test....))
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 14:49 EST
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YAY!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED AGAIN!!! I loved it!!! But poor Kagome! That would really suck.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 13:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY finally a chapter. I don't understand why inuyashas so mad because he has kagome. Update soon!!!!
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