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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 04:08 EDT
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Blah, I forgot to mention something in my last review. With Kagome being rather short and Ash being unnaturally tall, it makes me wonder how Ash was able to kiss Kag so easily without picking her up first. Of course, Ash has plen~ty of experience so I'm sure some bending isn't going to stall him from achieving his goals!
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As soon as I saw this was a X-over with the Dark-Hunter series, and then I peaked to see the author, I swear to you my mouth actually watered in anticipation. I have all but Acheron's book in the Dark-Hunter series, so I was wondering when I first saw the fic if it was up-to-date or not. Happily, I can say that it is and I love all the details you have incorporated so far. It's interesting seeing a different side of Ash and we all know how much he needs the love. Honestly, a Japanese Priestess with serious ties to the past and the supernatural paired with an 11k+ year-old Atlanthean God with two daughters. I wonder if Kag is going to meet the Simi and Katra...? Not to mention a very possesive Greek Goddess that Apostolos is connected to. Le sigh~ This reminds me of the last portion of the Cambell's 'Mato Soup Jingle...'Possibilities!'
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Reviewed By: SacredHime On: August 06, 2008 02:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I knew Ash would somehow be with Kagome that is such a good idea I wouldn't have put her with him maybe with Fury or someone since she would likley feel more comfortable with that. I've never beta'd but I'm interested I've done my on and my friends stuff if interested contact me at SacredHime@Gmail.com. Keep updatin hope u get better soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 19:05 EDT
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you love keeping us on edge don't ya? update soon. i have a feeling things are going to get explosive fast.
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Reviewed By: ScredHime On: August 01, 2008 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you soooo much for updatng!!! Keep it up I look forward to reading this story though its killing me to wait to find out what happens! Hurry and update again the suspense is killin me!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 00:39 EDT
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i think its adorable that Dev likes her. i can just see kagome repmanding Dev for trying to change her memories. ash's reaction reminds me of a jealous boyfriend. update again soon. i would like to read some more. the story is really great.
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Title: Shadows of a Past
Reviewed By: SacredHime On: July 29, 2008 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this idea! I tried to do this same crossover myself and it just isn't as good as yours I'm glad somebody had the same idea and did it. I'm hopin you update real soon I'm soooo lookin forward to it.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 05:55 EDT
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update soon. i am very curious about ash's reaction to kagome. he was acting a wee bit strange, plus he couldn't see her future. i have an idea, but i want to see on all of this is played out. ash is one of my favorite darkhunters. when is simi going to make an appearance. looking forward to more chapters.
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Reviewed By: kiara7703 On: July 21, 2008 19:44 EDT
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I just started reading your story, and i have to say i can't wait to see what happens next. please update soon. I am an inuyasha fan but an even bigger DARK HUNTER fan.
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Reviewed By: blackrose285438542 On: July 20, 2008 02:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing start to a story I know I will enjoy. I have only read one of the books in the series mentioned in here, but this story makes me want to read all of them. You put a lot of detail into this story which makes it all the more enjoyable. This is truly an original story. I have never read a crossover with that series of books, and I find it fun and exciting to read something new for a change. Anyway, keep up the good work. Please update soon I cannot wait to read the rest of this story!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimeHuntress181 On: July 17, 2008 16:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey just thought I'd let you know. This is a really good story and VERY original. I'm a fan of the dark hunter series Too but I never thought of doing an X-over. Good luck I hope you keep up with this story and update soon its really good.! Please keep writing your style is very unique and keeps me on the edge of my seat. Sincerely AnimeHuntress Ps. Update soon, and careful with your, 'yours'
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 23:20 EDT
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wow this is great. the emotion and description you've put into this is amazing.
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: BrDkn On: July 05, 2008 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been a fan of Inuyasha fanfiction for years and just recently starting reading the Dark-Hunter series. I must say this story definitely caught my eye. Please continue this great idea!! I also want to know who you are going to pair her up with. (Though I am hoping it is with Acheron :) ! )
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 16:23 EDT
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okay you definitely have my attention. you have a great start. update soon. i want to find out who you pair kagome up with.
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