| "Shadows Of A Past" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: HimenoHoshi On: March 10, 2012 07:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this back in '09, thought it was great then. just reread it today because it cried to be reread. It's still great. The loss of shippo made me sad but it gives her a legitiment reason to be skiddish. I know it's possible, hell probable, that you've forgotten this story all together but i'm just gunna hope you had the mt everest of writers blocks and that sometime fairly soon, or soonish, you will get a new chapter out. After all there is still a Daimon to deal with and I think Ash might be stunned to see Kagome lost in her power as she is. Hell this may actually be good for her. anyways maybe rereading what you've already wrote will help you blow the writers block to hell so you can turn out another chapter. |
Reviewed By: Midnyght On: May 09, 2009 03:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I've reread it several times while waiting for new chapters. You do a wonderful job with character development and plot. I can't wait to see what happens. Also I wanted to say congratulations!
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Reviewed By: Cheri On: January 17, 2009 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh u just stopped it there it was just gettin good!! U r evil!!!! Happy Birthday!
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Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 14:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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It was too short. Very good.
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Reviewed By: elizzy On: January 17, 2009 10:08 EST
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i really love this fic. hope you keep it going! :]
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 05:39 EST
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hey you stopped when it was getting good. that mean..lol. update when you have a chance.. i want to know amanda's reaction to kagomes powers..
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Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to guess the 8th. I hope it's soon. I love the dark hunter books and you've done the charaters justice. I thought that it was going to be a little weird but it's really, really good. I'm looking forward to your next post. Fantastic job!
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Reviewed By: Cheri On: January 06, 2009 14:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh that was mean! I hope your b-day is today! but I'm gonna guess the 15th.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 01:21 EST
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You are evil. I think your birthday is January 6th :) . . . I also think Kagome is going to shock the heck out of everyone by killing a bunch of Daimons in front of them
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 21:18 EST
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okay that was being cruel, to stop the chapter right when they get outside. i want what happens. update again when you have a moment. as for your birthday, my son guesses 21st. i think its the 15th. i guess we will see whenever you update.
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Reviewed By: huntressbella [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 22:45 EST
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This story is awesome!!! I can't wait to see what else will happen.
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool love your story. smiles
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 01:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Not Good. I am quite convinced that the reason there are a bunch of clueless Daimons in the front is because some Daimon who is NOT clueless is planning to come in the back. He sent them there as a distraction. Definitely not good for Kagome and company, Well, it should be fun, and its interesting that the father and daughter can see Kagome's aura and possibly some aspect of the jewel.
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Reviewed By: purplesneeze On: December 19, 2008 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rarely like crossovers, but this one is pretty interesting, (most likely because I don't know the Dark Hunters.) I hope your husband's surgery goes well. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: cheri On: December 18, 2008 20:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats it leave me panting for more!! I'll be prayin that everything goes alright for husband and best wishes for the holidays keep up the good work!
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