| "Mishaps In Motion" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 17:18 EDT
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okay come on you are leaving a cliffy. you know that has your readers just begging for more information. update soon.
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Reviewed By: madmiko, notsignedin On: September 08, 2008 04:51 EDT
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Well, I'm intrigued, but wary now of the second girl/demon who is shorter than Hiei and so strikingly beautiful. I'm drawing a blank at any canon character who fits her description, but since you told us to guess her identity, she has to be canon, right? Koenma noticing everyone's reactions to their nudity was funny. So were Hiei's thoughts about enjoying seeing Koenma have to replace his teenaged-looking body. Don't place too great an importance on the number of reviews dropping for a chapter or two. It's definitely never a steady increase, and this is a particularly busy time of year with the beginning of school. And you may lose readers when the pairings become clear. (You'll probably gain some, too. ^_^) Some people wait to see if the writer is really going to keep going before they start reviewing, and some people only review the action-packed chapters that make a big impression on them. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and the big revelation!
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Reviewed By: ojou On: September 08, 2008 04:25 EDT
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I am enjoying this story keep up the good work. having a bad back sucks i would go to a chiropractor for the back problem instead of a regular doc. all doctors can do for back pain is give you pain pills.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 20:48 EDT
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ok when are they going to get the girls some clothes? i would think that since koenma is so worried he'd give them his shirt or something. also has king enma been informed of whats happening? i really want to know his reaction
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 10:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So as to giving a guess on the women on the floor, I wanna say Midoriko and Kagome... But taking into consideration that neither is a demon... Ugh!!! Why are you making us wait you evil beinging you! Anyway love all your stories, just started reading them. Great crossovers, Update soon please X3!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 04:13 EDT
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But only if you are feeling well!.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh if she is not midoriko then who is she?!!!! please update soon
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 03:12 EDT
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okay now i am even more curious. why two girls? i think one is kagome, but i have no clue who the other one is. you love leaving us hanging don't cha? lol. update soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
midoriko ! I hope you are feeling better I know when I hurt my back I had tree years of PT (Fractured vert.) I love this story and I hope to see more but only if you are up to it thank you.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 18:15 EDT
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i think the second girl is midoriko
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 03:35 EDT
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That was a very interesting chapter. Very sad, too. I was intrigued by the wish Kagome made and by how it seemed to have changed the past, with Inuyasha and Kikyou knowing each other as children and him seeming to be just one of the villagers--accepted by everyone, despite his being a hanyou. It appears that if he does still live, and Shippou, and anyone else from that time, no one will remember her. That makes me very sad. And the well was destroyed. Since she went to help Midoriko, it seems likely that she is the one who showed up with her. but I'm open to surprises. ^_^ I'm so sorry to hear about your many troubles. For some reason, that old adage about trouble coming in threes DOES seem to happen a lot. I was hoping your back was healing well, but it sounds like your doctors are more interested in treating the symptoms. I know that has to be frustrating. And when a spouse loses a job, it's always rough both emotionally and financially. I'll keep my fingers crossed that he finds something good soon. Lack of internet access drives me crazy. It's sad how dependent we've become on it, but it's my major form of entertainment. I wish you well and good luck with everything!
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 02:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know one of the women is Kagome but is the other, maybe kikyo somehow? Or better yet, Midoriko? Maybe her soul if finally being set free hm? Anyway, great work and write more soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 02:11 EDT
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update soon. i want to know if kagome comes back. i have a feeling she is the innocent that koenma's father ingored.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 22:06 EDT
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this is a great story
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 09:49 EDT
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i hope you feel better and i agree, Hiei doing a funky gig dance while naked would be funny but only imbarasing to him not you, infact people might prase you for wrighting that : )
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