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Title: hello
Reviewed By: Akrary Yami On: October 27, 2010 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello i cant say much about grammar or stile because i am from an other contry and english is not my native lanwish and for originality well i think we all are great and must have 10 but i was really hopingto read the next chap so when are you going to post it pleas conty soon or i will need to live not knowing if why kags is like that what of midoriko and everything o and souta is he going to be happy or what ? hope to read you soon and when you update write and email to me pleas i y v k e r @ h o t m a i l . c o m
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: May 22, 2010 02:55 CDT
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I hope you plan to update soon. I LOVE Kagome's attitude now. :) PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 14:41 CST
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Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!! I love it, I love it!!!! This most recent chapter is spectacular. I am so looking forward to what comes next. You have a wonderful knack for putting things in just the right way to make it great. Your ability to manipulate words to the way you like them is just grand. Thank you for more wonderful words to enjoy. Keep it up. Kya77
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 20, 2008 17:13 CST
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Great new chapter. Make sure Kagome is the major character. Is Mid going to be staying long? I hope she eventually leaves for the afterlife. Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 02:24 CST
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this is great, i cant wait to find out what's going on
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 01:19 CST
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Very interesting! You surprised me with which girl was doing the guarding. ^_^ How gallant of Hiei to throw her his robe, even though he wasn't bothered in the slightest by her nudity and neither was she. Poor Kuwabara. I could feel his embarrassment. I will try to re-read your question and if I think of anything, I'll let you know. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 01:19 CST
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kagome and Midoriko interesting. update soon. i would like to know what happens next. i do like that line when akgome says hiei smells yummy. lol
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 00:50 CST
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Has Kagome lost her mind or something? And what's with the eye thing? Please update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 20:50 CST
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please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kurai Mori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 12:48 CDT
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I am truly sorry to hear about your son, and I hope he gets well. I can only hope the hospital takes good care of him (all of the hospitals I've been to in Oregon do their best to take excellent care of their patients). Anyways, I hope you don't lose your sanity and everything works out for the best. Family does comes first.
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 20:20 CDT
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i will pray for you and your son and i hope he feels better and gets well soon
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 17:18 CDT
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so sorry to hear of your son's troubles and hope for the best. ♥
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 16:18 CDT
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okay come on you are leaving a cliffy. you know that has your readers just begging for more information. update soon.
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Reviewed By: madmiko, notsignedin On: September 08, 2008 03:51 CDT
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Well, I'm intrigued, but wary now of the second girl/demon who is shorter than Hiei and so strikingly beautiful. I'm drawing a blank at any canon character who fits her description, but since you told us to guess her identity, she has to be canon, right? Koenma noticing everyone's reactions to their nudity was funny. So were Hiei's thoughts about enjoying seeing Koenma have to replace his teenaged-looking body. Don't place too great an importance on the number of reviews dropping for a chapter or two. It's definitely never a steady increase, and this is a particularly busy time of year with the beginning of school. And you may lose readers when the pairings become clear. (You'll probably gain some, too. ^_^) Some people wait to see if the writer is really going to keep going before they start reviewing, and some people only review the action-packed chapters that make a big impression on them. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and the big revelation!
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Reviewed By: ojou On: September 08, 2008 03:25 CDT
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I am enjoying this story keep up the good work. having a bad back sucks i would go to a chiropractor for the back problem instead of a regular doc. all doctors can do for back pain is give you pain pills.
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