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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 20:48 EDT
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ok when are they going to get the girls some clothes? i would think that since koenma is so worried he'd give them his shirt or something. also has king enma been informed of whats happening? i really want to know his reaction
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 10:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So as to giving a guess on the women on the floor, I wanna say Midoriko and Kagome... But taking into consideration that neither is a demon... Ugh!!! Why are you making us wait you evil beinging you! Anyway love all your stories, just started reading them. Great crossovers, Update soon please X3!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 04:13 EDT
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But only if you are feeling well!.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh if she is not midoriko then who is she?!!!! please update soon
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 03:12 EDT
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okay now i am even more curious. why two girls? i think one is kagome, but i have no clue who the other one is. you love leaving us hanging don't cha? lol. update soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
midoriko ! I hope you are feeling better I know when I hurt my back I had tree years of PT (Fractured vert.) I love this story and I hope to see more but only if you are up to it thank you.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 18:15 EDT
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i think the second girl is midoriko
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 03:35 EDT
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That was a very interesting chapter. Very sad, too. I was intrigued by the wish Kagome made and by how it seemed to have changed the past, with Inuyasha and Kikyou knowing each other as children and him seeming to be just one of the villagers--accepted by everyone, despite his being a hanyou. It appears that if he does still live, and Shippou, and anyone else from that time, no one will remember her. That makes me very sad. And the well was destroyed. Since she went to help Midoriko, it seems likely that she is the one who showed up with her. but I'm open to surprises. ^_^ I'm so sorry to hear about your many troubles. For some reason, that old adage about trouble coming in threes DOES seem to happen a lot. I was hoping your back was healing well, but it sounds like your doctors are more interested in treating the symptoms. I know that has to be frustrating. And when a spouse loses a job, it's always rough both emotionally and financially. I'll keep my fingers crossed that he finds something good soon. Lack of internet access drives me crazy. It's sad how dependent we've become on it, but it's my major form of entertainment. I wish you well and good luck with everything!
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 02:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know one of the women is Kagome but is the other, maybe kikyo somehow? Or better yet, Midoriko? Maybe her soul if finally being set free hm? Anyway, great work and write more soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 02:11 EDT
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update soon. i want to know if kagome comes back. i have a feeling she is the innocent that koenma's father ingored.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 22:06 EDT
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this is a great story
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 09:49 EDT
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i hope you feel better and i agree, Hiei doing a funky gig dance while naked would be funny but only imbarasing to him not you, infact people might prase you for wrighting that : )
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 23:31 EDT
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That was completely unexpected! I really enjoyed the description of the fates working their "magic" or spell or whatever. It was really beautiful. But I was NOT expecting TWO women to appear. (And certainly not looking like lovers. ^_~) I also really liked their words to Souta. That was well done. I certainly understand you not being able to update for a while. (Even though Hiei dancing around naked still sounds good to me!) But, I will be anxiously waiting to see what happens next here. Take care of yourself!
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 09:30 EDT
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well i am glad that you can wright at all, my mom did not start wrighting stuff till me and my yunger sis were 15 and 16
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 07:47 EDT
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Very interesting chapter! I liked the three fates being there to set right a wrong committed long ago. The conversation with Hiei contained a nice bit of foreshadowing. I really enjoyed the way you wrote Yusuke in this one, as well as the sweet bit of fluff between Kuwabara and Botan. I am really looking forward to seeing what souta's reaction to being taken to the Reikai is, as well as the results of the fates' "fixing." Now, since it looks like I am the only one (at least on this site) who said anything at all about your last chapter being short, I want to let you know that I only mentioned it in response to YOU saying that your chapter was short. You apologized for it being so short, so in my review I said yes, it was a short update, but that you had packed a lot of good stuff into it. I wasn't criticizing or complaining about the length at all, -- I was actually trying to give you a huge compliment. I'm sorry to hear about your son's health problems. I am the mother of 4 children myself, including a daughter who has had three surgeries in the last year-and-a-half. I have also lost 4 family members in the last five months, and consequently have not been able to update my own chapter story. So you will never hear me tell anyone that they don't update quickly enough or that their updates are too short, and I am sorry if you thought I did. I hope you will be able to continue your writing as your time allows because I have been enjoying it.
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