| "Midwinter Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zumm On: October 06, 2008 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please dont make us wait too long for the next Installlment!!
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Reviewed By: taixishi On: August 20, 2008 07:23 CDT
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this chapter (13) was heartbreaking...oh how I find myself hating Sesshomaru (and for that matter, Sheng as well) right now. I think Kagome was too lenient with him (forfeiting the fight, then letting him see her in 2 weeks vs. a month). Maybe she can find an alternate love interest in the meantime (I know you'll probably never do that, but Sesshomaru so doesn't deserve to win her back with the way he acted...)
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Title: youkailover1
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so loving this story and cannot wait for more. I love how powerful Kagome is and that she didn't just completely cave for Sesshomaru and give it up. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 07:21 CDT
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Ah ha ha..."I'm a stoic prick" versus "I hate stoic pricks"! That pretty much sums everything up to this point, doesn't it? Looking forward to the next one already--Cheers!
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: Caught_by_silver On: August 17, 2008 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoy your fanfic...sesshomaru gets OOC, and usually that makes me just click out of a fic, but your story just keeps me coming back for more. i can't wait for your next chapter. i just read spring fever and all there was of midwinter dream in one sitting and i cant be happier I LOVE IT! im just glad i found out about it today instead of before you last installment or else i would gone crazy at the UST! now that they are admitting to it i can go to sleep tonight without my brain trying to beat itself. keep on writing! your wonderful ~Dor~
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Reviewed By: taixishi On: August 15, 2008 05:17 CDT
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ah, the romance heats up. a bit fluffy but fun :) This chapter was generally satisfying, but I have to comment on a consistent word usage/spelling problem I've noticed. Although generally your spelling seems to be fine, you repeatedly use the word "gapped" where I presume you mean to write "gaped" (as in, the verb "to gape"). (Or maybe you meant to write "gasped.") Anyhow, while it might seem like a minor error, it does get distracting especially since you repeat the word a few times in various contexts. It disrupts the flow of the story (I keep getting a mental image of the characters stopping and making a big space/hole in the floor, instead of a picture of their mouths hanging open). That's all, until next time...
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Reviewed By: jay jay On: August 14, 2008 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. im not one for writing reviews but had to comment xD you have an excellent writing style that leaves me incredibly frustrated at every chapter cus i want to know what happens!! AWSOME!!
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Title: youkailover1-Amy
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love love love this story! And I completely agree that Inuyasha and Kagome were not well suited as lovers/mates due to his immaturity. They would make better friends and brother/sister relationship. Sess and Kagome is hot!! Its like you know Sess is not as hard as he seems and that Kagome just has that way of getting to people and making them realize things about themselves. I love the way you have written Kagome's character as being strong, independent, a worthy opponent and yet innocent in several ways. Its good to see her as something other than the odd little miko from another era that needs protecting all the time. I can't wait to read more and hopefully you'll get more written soon! Good luck in your move and in your writing!!
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it's great! i'm really wnjoying it and how you build the relationship up instead of just WHAM. a few typos here and there in the latest chapters, but nothing that really distracts one. can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: youkailover1 On: August 04, 2008 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this storyline! Its so great to have other fans imagining the story after the ending! Especially when it takes a different turn like with Sess and kagome. Thats HOT! I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: taixishi On: August 04, 2008 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been really enjoying this story. You've got a nice dynamic going on between Sessh and Kag and have also incorporated various engaging OC's (e.g. Sheng). I do feel the need to comment on the end of this most recent chapter though -- I was left a bit confused (I thought the entire point of the trip was to re-seal the stake/barrier with Bashamon. It feels like you rushed the ending of the chapter after they (presumably?) returned the stake to its destination). I'm left wondering whether they took the stake with them or left it in the mountain cave (and if it's been left in the cave, did they ever re-seal the barrier?) You might want to flush this part out just a little more since it feels somewhat unresolved; at one point they are traveling in the dark and the next they are outside in the light, but I do wonder what's become of Bashamon. (Also, perhaps you've intentionally decided to omit any reference to Bashamon's physical form while Sessh is carrying the stake, but is he essentially getting dragged along behind while the stake is being carried? I'm having a bit of trouble conceptualizing the logistics here...) Other than this minor confusion, I've been quite enjoying the story and look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: duck113 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 13:26 CDT
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excellent chap! love the conversations-
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Reviewed By: ojou On: July 30, 2008 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Theres not much else I can say. How Fluffy and Kagome interact, is funny and frustrating at times. Your oc's are so funny and they just fit into the story so well. I cant wait for the next chapter and the next and so on. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: duck113 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a very versatile author! Your sesshy pov had me laughing out loud (& I can count on 1 hand the fanfics capable of doing that to me)& you are excellent at keeping characters true to themselves while having them develop very naturally. I hope you write fast- I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 04:33 CDT
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i love how well you write tension! you build it up just so and let it linger so i'm always excited to see new chapters, keep up the great work!
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