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Reviewed By: jay jay On: August 14, 2008 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. im not one for writing reviews but had to comment xD you have an excellent writing style that leaves me incredibly frustrated at every chapter cus i want to know what happens!! AWSOME!!
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Title: youkailover1-Amy
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love love love this story! And I completely agree that Inuyasha and Kagome were not well suited as lovers/mates due to his immaturity. They would make better friends and brother/sister relationship. Sess and Kagome is hot!! Its like you know Sess is not as hard as he seems and that Kagome just has that way of getting to people and making them realize things about themselves. I love the way you have written Kagome's character as being strong, independent, a worthy opponent and yet innocent in several ways. Its good to see her as something other than the odd little miko from another era that needs protecting all the time. I can't wait to read more and hopefully you'll get more written soon! Good luck in your move and in your writing!!
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it's great! i'm really wnjoying it and how you build the relationship up instead of just WHAM. a few typos here and there in the latest chapters, but nothing that really distracts one. can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: youkailover1 On: August 04, 2008 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this storyline! Its so great to have other fans imagining the story after the ending! Especially when it takes a different turn like with Sess and kagome. Thats HOT! I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: taixishi On: August 04, 2008 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been really enjoying this story. You've got a nice dynamic going on between Sessh and Kag and have also incorporated various engaging OC's (e.g. Sheng). I do feel the need to comment on the end of this most recent chapter though -- I was left a bit confused (I thought the entire point of the trip was to re-seal the stake/barrier with Bashamon. It feels like you rushed the ending of the chapter after they (presumably?) returned the stake to its destination). I'm left wondering whether they took the stake with them or left it in the mountain cave (and if it's been left in the cave, did they ever re-seal the barrier?) You might want to flush this part out just a little more since it feels somewhat unresolved; at one point they are traveling in the dark and the next they are outside in the light, but I do wonder what's become of Bashamon. (Also, perhaps you've intentionally decided to omit any reference to Bashamon's physical form while Sessh is carrying the stake, but is he essentially getting dragged along behind while the stake is being carried? I'm having a bit of trouble conceptualizing the logistics here...) Other than this minor confusion, I've been quite enjoying the story and look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: duck113 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 13:26 CDT
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excellent chap! love the conversations-
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Reviewed By: ojou On: July 30, 2008 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Theres not much else I can say. How Fluffy and Kagome interact, is funny and frustrating at times. Your oc's are so funny and they just fit into the story so well. I cant wait for the next chapter and the next and so on. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: duck113 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a very versatile author! Your sesshy pov had me laughing out loud (& I can count on 1 hand the fanfics capable of doing that to me)& you are excellent at keeping characters true to themselves while having them develop very naturally. I hope you write fast- I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 04:33 CDT
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i love how well you write tension! you build it up just so and let it linger so i'm always excited to see new chapters, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 15:23 CDT
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this story gets better and better as it goes along, a few typos here and there, but thankfully nothing that glaringly detracts from the story. you write so well, and yeah, that whole cold ass water in the freezing winter bit would suck and you captured the feeling of it incredibly
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Title: GREAT as always
Reviewed By: Sango-san On: July 08, 2008 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always my lovely author you have done wonderful! I quiet love the humor in Sheng. Do post more soon I am diing to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: sam1200 On: July 04, 2008 20:52 CDT
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i love the sesshy pov. it was great. kagome is also good. i like that u made her grow up.
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 09:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mn(pleased humm)... very good. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 17:04 CDT
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it's great, really :) very happy you're continuing it and i love how frequently you update!
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Reviewed By: Kiora Mizukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 10:12 CDT
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WOWWY!!!! xD I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!! I READ THE SEQUEL AND I CAN'T FREAKIN WAIT FOR THE SECOND CHAPTER!!!! x3 HEE HEE HEE!!! (Really hyper and happy) I can't wait UNTIL CHAPTER 2!!! AND PLEASE!! DO IT QUICK!!! x3
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