| "Honey, I'm home" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Tomboyshapeshifter On: January 05, 2010 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...this story made me cry...and i don't cry easily.... Oh how i love this couple and i can really see those words coming from them....you did a fabulous job.
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo(unsigned In) On: January 17, 2009 00:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I think the story carries the fluff well since you balance it with D's temper. Btw The Call By Regina Spektor adds to the mood.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 21:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed that. You had the words each character would say down very well.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 10:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh, this was so sweet...too bad D is so stubborn that he had to wait years to say it. *sigh* Kamis what can you do with/about them?
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