| "Loveless Suna" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: May 28, 2011 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heeeeeeey wut up meh homey? havent reviewed in forever and i can explain that with two reasons one i didnt have internet for a while and two im lazy as hell. so here i am finalleh reviewin on yur progressing fic, overall i still think you have done a nice job, not cheesy original, not to mention you actually UPDATE unlike other ijits who ditch their fic (Which is one of my top pet peeves of fanictions). so basically im giving you what youtube callz a thumbz up >:D yours truly the hick Camp-crystal-lake P.S i may have a few typos in this review but im to lazeh to fix them so just ignore em. :) |
Reviewed By: 1326 On: May 17, 2011 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It is a really good story. I could not stop reading it once I started. I had to know what happened next. |
Reviewed By: alyssa james [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2010 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It's probably the only one I kept up with with this many chapters. Keep writing, as you are extremely talented ~Peace~
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Pink Octopus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 17:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! also becuase garra is my favorite! keep writing your heart out man cuz it's good, good, good!
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: February 10, 2010 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wat a twist... I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing sista!! It gets better and better!
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Reviewed By: Sol aka blackleaff On: October 20, 2009 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm really impressed. Your writing style is very interesting and it makes me think that actually I'm the heroine of this story! xD And coming from me, this means a lot - I've read maaaany fanfics, and only a few of them totally caught me into the plot. I'm looking forward to reading more!! Oh, and btw sorry if my english is unreadable (hope u know what I mean) -.-'
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Reviewed By: Kida of the Wolves On: September 22, 2009 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot I love this fic. Lol it's so funny and has the perfect balance of action and romance. As well as suspense and comedy. Though somthing I must say is please don't ad a pregnency. There are to many good stories ruined by uneeded births. Only 2 Naruto fanfics I've read have a good prenancy in them and it's mandatory for the plot. In this story it's mostly about Gaara trying not to admit he's inlove. Saying he loves a child will kinda ruin it. Even if he admits he's inlove before then. But on that note, please keepy up the good work! lol after re-reading this review it kinda sounds mean DX please don't take it that way. I tried to say it as nicely as possible lol. I think the entire story is the shiz. Hehe I love all the lemons. It's rare to see a fanfic with more then 2 lemons. Lol I always wondered what was going through Gaara's head in the first few chapters. Well I'll try not to write to much. (Voices inside my head"To late for that") W00t I love this story please don't think it sucks!
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Title: loveless suna
Reviewed By: Cecile On: August 28, 2009 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm looking forward reading the next chapter. I can' wait. Keep writing! Vivement la suite. A French fan :))
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Reviewed By: TJD41066 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2009 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should totally put this on fanfiction.net!!! its soooo good
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Reviewed By: LittleBean On: July 08, 2009 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow your fanfic is really good. please make some more chapters, i'd really like to read it. i've never really seen gaara so protective [possesive] before O.o please please please make more!!
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: July 06, 2009 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm good point. i never thought of that.. But where do you fit the pregnancy....Thats a problem...
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: June 18, 2009 12:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh i didn't think about gaara's face..Hmmmm...But that isn't something he would forget...How do we make him forget..All i can think of is alcohol...
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Reviewed By: Surim [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 10:00 EDT
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this is a really good story! i was hooked from chapter 1! keep writting and update soon. i can't wait until gaara confesses his love for shizuka!
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Reviewed By: nightbloodwolf On: June 01, 2009 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, you rock!!! i just love the way that Gaara gets suspicious of every guy!!!! even if he knows they're trustable. anyway, really fun this story and im glad i stumbled upon it. more gaara jealousy!!!!!! weee! with sasuke of course... i think Eho, must at least suspect Shizuka has some Uchiha blood and will try to get her. man, please please try to update fast!!! and i love your story!!! can't wait for next chapter.. by the way...love your lemons XD
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 20:48 EDT
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Hello to the master and commander! I am glad that you enjoyed the comments that I have given you, but trust me my dear they are very well worth it. I send glomps in your direction! I am glad that Gaara and Shinzuka are publicly back together because it makes life for them more interesting. Well, I at least think so. What can I say I love the drama that the two stir up. In addition, I love the way you have brought up the jealousy that Gaara has for Sasuke. The quote,"The Uchiha can take care of himself; you don't have to worry about him.", is perfect. My response: Duh! It is Sasuke that we're talking about. What can I say I have a soft spot for the raven. I have been pondering as to whom Eho has been getting her information from and I am beginning to suspect her teacher. I maybe completely off base with the remote idea, but I feel that it has to be someone that she has gotten close to that may make the vague connection. Keep up the great work and I eagerly await your next update!
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