| "Loveless Suna" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sol aka blackleaff On: October 20, 2009 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm really impressed. Your writing style is very interesting and it makes me think that actually I'm the heroine of this story! xD And coming from me, this means a lot - I've read maaaany fanfics, and only a few of them totally caught me into the plot. I'm looking forward to reading more!! Oh, and btw sorry if my english is unreadable (hope u know what I mean) -.-'
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Reviewed By: Kida of the Wolves On: September 22, 2009 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot I love this fic. Lol it's so funny and has the perfect balance of action and romance. As well as suspense and comedy. Though somthing I must say is please don't ad a pregnency. There are to many good stories ruined by uneeded births. Only 2 Naruto fanfics I've read have a good prenancy in them and it's mandatory for the plot. In this story it's mostly about Gaara trying not to admit he's inlove. Saying he loves a child will kinda ruin it. Even if he admits he's inlove before then. But on that note, please keepy up the good work! lol after re-reading this review it kinda sounds mean DX please don't take it that way. I tried to say it as nicely as possible lol. I think the entire story is the shiz. Hehe I love all the lemons. It's rare to see a fanfic with more then 2 lemons. Lol I always wondered what was going through Gaara's head in the first few chapters. Well I'll try not to write to much. (Voices inside my head"To late for that") W00t I love this story please don't think it sucks!
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Title: loveless suna
Reviewed By: Cecile On: August 28, 2009 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm looking forward reading the next chapter. I can' wait. Keep writing! Vivement la suite. A French fan :))
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Reviewed By: TJD41066 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2009 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should totally put this on fanfiction.net!!! its soooo good
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Reviewed By: LittleBean On: July 08, 2009 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow your fanfic is really good. please make some more chapters, i'd really like to read it. i've never really seen gaara so protective [possesive] before O.o please please please make more!!
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: July 06, 2009 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm good point. i never thought of that.. But where do you fit the pregnancy....Thats a problem...
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: June 18, 2009 12:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh i didn't think about gaara's face..Hmmmm...But that isn't something he would forget...How do we make him forget..All i can think of is alcohol...
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Reviewed By: Surim [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 10:00 EDT
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this is a really good story! i was hooked from chapter 1! keep writting and update soon. i can't wait until gaara confesses his love for shizuka!
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Reviewed By: nightbloodwolf On: June 01, 2009 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, you rock!!! i just love the way that Gaara gets suspicious of every guy!!!! even if he knows they're trustable. anyway, really fun this story and im glad i stumbled upon it. more gaara jealousy!!!!!! weee! with sasuke of course... i think Eho, must at least suspect Shizuka has some Uchiha blood and will try to get her. man, please please try to update fast!!! and i love your story!!! can't wait for next chapter.. by the way...love your lemons XD
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 20:48 EDT
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Hello to the master and commander! I am glad that you enjoyed the comments that I have given you, but trust me my dear they are very well worth it. I send glomps in your direction! I am glad that Gaara and Shinzuka are publicly back together because it makes life for them more interesting. Well, I at least think so. What can I say I love the drama that the two stir up. In addition, I love the way you have brought up the jealousy that Gaara has for Sasuke. The quote,"The Uchiha can take care of himself; you don't have to worry about him.", is perfect. My response: Duh! It is Sasuke that we're talking about. What can I say I have a soft spot for the raven. I have been pondering as to whom Eho has been getting her information from and I am beginning to suspect her teacher. I maybe completely off base with the remote idea, but I feel that it has to be someone that she has gotten close to that may make the vague connection. Keep up the great work and I eagerly await your next update!
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: April 15, 2009 19:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! omg!!! I got a good idea!! Instead of making gaara forget a pill make A 'defective' Pill!That would work...
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: April 09, 2009 18:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job!! Once again you impress me!! As for the pill thing that was funny!! Just make sure when the time is right he forgets To take the pill..:} Keep on trucking!!:D
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 23:03 EDT
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Well, hello again! I wanted to tell you how amazingly talented you are. Why you ask? Because your story kicks ass! What can I say I'm an addict. So, Gaara thought that she was messing with Sasuke..nice. I like the jealous Gaara, it suits his personality. I'm not sure how a blood sample will help steal the sharingan, but I'm quite certain that you will explain this in due time. Is she ever going to tell Gaara that she looks to Sasuke as a father figure? I think that this will help with the way that Gaara and Sasuke interact in the story. One final question: Does Gaara ever go off the pill? I think that it would be funny if he 'forgot' to take it. I am not sure why I find the thought humerous at this juncture in time, but I do. Please keep up the great work. I greatly appreciate it.
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: March 01, 2009 14:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet?!?! Just imagining a gaara jr Running around is funny!! You can only guess gaara's reaction!!
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Reviewed By: Camp-crystal-lake On: March 01, 2009 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im still read'n this story!!! It keeps getting better and Better!!Good writers deserve atleast one loyal fan!
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