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| "Requiem of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: youkailover1
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got confused at first since I'd read the first two stories and was wondering what happened at the end! ha ha. Now I know its a 3rd story and I'm thoroughly happy with the first chapter so far! I liked how you let Kagome find Chiro with Sesshomaru and I think that was the best way to handle it. I can't wait for more chapters and am really impressed with what you have written in all 3 sections!
| Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My recurrent insomnia was NOT helped in the least by this latest addition to your "trilogy" of Sess/Kag stories... I found it yesterday afternoon and am, at 5:30AM my time, now finishing this first chapter of your third story. I cannot wait to find out whether or not they finally get together - or how, or when - and I am going to go buggy waiting, I fear. Actually, though, all of this is a long-winded way of saying THANK YOU for a thoroughly engrossing read. I doubt I've had my nose stuck in the computer for such a protracted length of time in QUITE a while. In addition, the various twists and turns made me forget my own problems during that time, for which I am eternally grateful. I look forward to the next exciting, heart-wrenching chapter!!! ~~Wiccan~~
| Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 06:49 CDT
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Hm, I think it's probably fitting to do the third story in an open POV. First we spent some time with Sesshomaru, then we spent some time with Kagome--and how would you pick which one to write from for the third story? ^_^ Unless you wanted to make a fourth, to make things fair. I'm looking forward to seeing how things come together! Cheers!
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 12:19 CDT
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so we're finally on the third part, does this mean we'll get info on what other people are thinking such as sango, miroku, inuyasha, sess's mom, ect?
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