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Title: Perfect
Reviewed By: InuKaglover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2024 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good! I've never read an alpha/beta like that before. Definitely
original and well written! 10⭐
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 11:15 PST
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I love the unique plot line, far from the cliched Alpha youkai story line that happens all too often. I myself have been guilty of that. I could appreciate the development of understanding that Kagome goes through. Nice touch with the documentary and you have obviously had fun in the comparision between the animal kingdom and the human heirarchy. Well played my dear. I am greatly anticipating next chapter so I shall wait no longer. |
Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 10:49 PST
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I just couldn't decide what to take on first, so I will be slowly picking my way through these! I love the tension building in this chapter. Safe to say that these two have the same issues any normal couple has, self doubt and always jumping to their own conclusions. I loved the whole Hojo and paradox scene and found myself giggling for some time after. Interested to see how the alpha/beta heirarchy is going to pan out for these two. Off to the next chapter... |
Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2011 06:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was...Amazing. |
Reviewed By: sarah86 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2010 21:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that even though i am new to this web site i still have been able to read a few other writers i still find my self come back read to read more and more of your works.To but in other words i love your works and they have inspired me to start writing my own story down.I have yet to post any thing yet due to my own writing skills.I hope when i do post you would be so kind as to review my work and give me any pointers you would be willing to share. All and all i'm happy i found this site and your writings and i think you for all your works of art. |
Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2010 11:27 PST
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I can't express enough how much I love re-reading your stories. They really are a life saver for me right now, during these hard times. Thanks for the re-post :) |
Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: chino-chan inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 15:25 PDT
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Hi! I wanted to thank you for your review in my story Absolution. You've no idea how much it means to me that a writer with your repertory compliments my stories. Also, I had already read much of your work, and Alpha-beta and Mating season are my favorites. Anyway, thank you very much, and I hope you'll keep following.
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 14:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great fic. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors. You write the most original and creative stories, yet somehow manage to stay true to the characters. And I know I've said it before but I love how you show their emotions and the thoughts behind their actions. I know most people would have had Kagome remove Inuyasha's rosary but I'm glad that you didn't. There are times that she needs it make them equal, and that is what this story was about. That they be equal. This is the type of thing I would have loved to have seen happen in the anime or manga. Great job.
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Title: woot
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 01:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome, I love the play on canine instinct. I always have. I hope you have the time and inspiration to right somemore romantic PWP's again soon.
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
usually don't like it when people make inuyasha to much like adog (although it is true he has dogly habits, his mind is human) u pull it off very well though, love how you set the pack thing up, where she didnt notice she was asking that until after it came out, and I felt sorry for Inuyasha when he asked if he did something wrong after she said she didn't wanna be alpha, I could just imagine the way his ears would droop, cute yet sad, great fic like always, look forward to more. You're awesome! Keep up the good work =D
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Reviewed By: johneotaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 19:16 PST
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Awesome plot. It feels as though it was written just for me.
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Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 03:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Flawless as always.
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Graidon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I love the concept, I love the way it's written and I love most of all I love the mixture of the justified OOC-ness of Inuyasha and the old grumpy Inuyasha. Just when I was about to think, "Oh Lord, she's gonna ruin this great concept with Inuyasha acting all crazy", you give such good and justifiable reasons for his behavior. You could have just as easily let him act all different and then try to make sense of it at the end, like other authors would try to do, but you kept the story so real and believable throughout that it makes it all the better. I guess that's how you can tell the greats from the amatuers.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: SilentQuill23 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 21:34 PDT
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You did a great job. I hate the fics that are just, "Kagome's in heat" and "Inuyasha slammed his (*$(*$@)(* into her dripping tight flowing *&^%$!@ and other lewd references" it was Tastefully and well written, i really enjoyed it. :)
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Reviewed By: Bluejello [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"cram into her Tartus of a backpack" I assume you're referring to the TARDIS of Doctor Who? Otherwise, I seriously need to brush up on my Greek mythology. ;)
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