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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: January 21, 2009 20:12 CST Comment/Review: Wow, love the really cute part at the end. Things are looking up for Inuyasha, though I really hope that he and Kagome get back together. At any rate, good luck with the next chapter and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: charmer000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 14:04 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: is this the end? if not,i hope inuyasha and kagome get back together....plz? lol
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Reviewed By: lilcuti22holla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 17:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: lol i changed my mind! :)& r they reallyy not goin 2 get back together..?
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Reviewed By: lilcuti22holla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 17:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: sooo dose this mean inu & kag r not goin 2 get back 2gether????? If so awwwwman inu really become a man...i think if kag could just see that & they would work thing out it would be great!!! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 23:55 CST Comment/Review: Awwwww Inuyasha's becoming such a great man!! I really hope Kikyo doesnt come and try and mess things up again and if she does i hope Inu realizes exactly how horrible she is and tells her off or something to get rid of her for good. Well great chapter as always but i cant wait until Inuyahsa's feelings for Kagome pop up in him again!!! So update soon!! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 21:31 CST Comment/Review: Hmm... He thinks Kagome is with Kouga, and he does not care? So he really does not love her anymore. And she still can't forgive him... If they'll ever get together, you'll have to make them fall in love all over again. I wonder how you'll do that, that is, if you will do it. Why do I sense that this new development in his job will cause trouble? Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: January 09, 2009 19:58 CST Comment/Review: Hm...I'm kind of disappointed that Kouga is getting along so well with Kagome. I guess this will be a realistic solution to the Inuyasha/Kagome problem. But still, I just hope that in the future chapters they can end up together. Anyways, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 23:40 CST Comment/Review: Chapter 14... and I'm so depressed. How can you repair something after so brutally, and so mindlessly breaking it? That is, if you 'want' to repair it. It's just not possible... definitely not like purifying jewel shards. Whatever you do, it will always be tainted. Very good story. I'm looking forward to read what you have left to say about these poor souls.
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 19:37 CST Comment/Review: End of chapter 11, and wow... that was intense. Poor Kagome has just learned about the history of his relationship with Kikyo. I can't imagine how shocking that must have been for Kagome, and I can't imagine what Inuyasha is in for after this moment. I'm sure it won't be nice. I'm sorry that I couldn't write any reviews since the 2. chapter, but I just couldn't stop reading! I'm completely hooked! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 15:04 CST Comment/Review: Aww... I just read Chapter 2, and I must sat that it's so sad. Poor Tai, and poor Kagome... Hmm, although I don't like Inuyasha right now for what he did and for who he became, I can understand the alienation he felt because of what he has been through during his childhood and his struggle to prove himself. I have hopes for him though. I'm not sure where you're planning to go with this, but I feel like he will reach 'enlightenment' sometime as the story progresses, and become a better man as he struggles to get his family back. Very interesting setting, not one I've read before, and good writing! If you'll excuse me, I'll continue reading the following chapters now. Ha!
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: January 03, 2009 01:23 CST Comment/Review: Wow, I really hope you update soon! Please! This story is building up really well. I hope they end up back together, but I suppose the story is still fleshing out right now. Good luck with future chapters and happy new year!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 23:03 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Indeed...who know? I'm really enjoying this! I didn't expect Kagome to be mad at Sango and Miroku but I liked that they weren't blameless. And that Kagome is dealing with this as an adult. I'm excited to read more...update when you can! ~Amber ;)
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Title: T-T Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 13:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg.....please tell me they do get back together...i feel so much for tai...and gosh...inuyasha about to cry?! so touching please write the next chapter soon! i have fallen in love with this story!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 15:52 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow...I hope Inuyasha and Kagome can mend their relationship SOMEHOW. As for kikyo...I hate that women soooo very much!!! That THING was his first love? She may be pretty but she's a disgusting rotten no good for nothing peice of crap inside! Dig a deep hole in the ground and bury her!
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: December 30, 2008 23:17 CST Comment/Review: Wow, another wonderful update. This story is just so addictive. I really hope you update soon because I can't wait to find out what happens next. Though I do have to say that I really do resent Chiyo for trying to "steal" Kagome like that from Tai. Anyways, please update soon!
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