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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! This is cute. InuYasha doesn't look like he knows what he wants, but he seems to be getting there. And the changes he's making along the way (his relationship with his son and Kagome) are detailed nicely. I like that he realized how much he messed up, but maybe you could give a little more info on his current relations with Kikyou (whatever they may be)? I would think that with any sort of affair you can't just drop it like that. But anyway...great fic! I'm lovin the very real-life problems Inu/Kag have and the complications that prevent them from fixing it. Tai is adorable, too and so wise beyond his little three years. "I don't want silver hair..." My heart broke when I read that, just as the ending to this current chapter brought a smile to my face. I think every kid's done the "I hate you" and then felt bad about it. Hell, I'm 17 years old and I still do it...then I angst about it later ;P Will be looking forward to the next update! You've got me hooked! ~Amber
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Title: UGH
Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2008 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is why I REALLy hate kikyo....stupid >*BLAH*<
continue writing please!!! i love your story so far! =)
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Reviewed By: Tim78 On: December 18, 2008 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story and the plot seems to being with many directions to choose from. There are going to be ups and downs but Yash and Kagome belong with each other even if nowjust learned it and she is afraid of it now plis what that broad Kikyo said. SO lets have them face some adversity but be together and not have Kagome or Yash sleep with anybody. Yash really just wants Kagome now so he won't stray plus Kagome doesn't sleep with easily since Yash is the only one so far. Plus Kouga interested but he's to forward and has a child of his own and a ex somewhere too.Nice job looking forward to more soon please.
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 21:54 CST
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Awww poor Tai!! Ugh Kagome and Inuyasha are sooo frustrating i cant even comment on them right now! Just please update before i go insane!!! O n wen da heck is Inuyasha gonna find out wat happened at the store and wat Hana tols Tai??? UGH!!! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: December 18, 2008 03:32 CST
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Omg! I really hope you update soon! This story is just way too good. I also really hope that it's an Inu/Kag story. Hm...this is so nerve-wracking, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: December 17, 2008 23:27 CST
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aw I hope Tai's not gonna think that Kagome has replaced him with Kouga and his daughter
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 18:58 CST
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......Omgudness. I dispise Kikyo soooooo much right now. But i must say that Inuyasha shouldve told Kagome a long time ago about her but still that dumb witch had no right to go and mess up their lifes even more! Ugh that slutty home wrecking clay pot bihh!!! UGH!!!!!!!!! Please please please update soon! I really cant wait till the next chapter now! This story is just so good and has been since the beginning but now its just irresitable! I really want Inuyasha and Kagome to get back together sometime soon and if you would please be so kind as to make Kagome beat Kikyo's behind somewhere in the future and also have Inuyasha tell her off and make it clear to her that the oinly person he wants and loves is Kagome. I mean who cares if she was his first Kagome is gonna be his forever! Well aside from by senseless banter please upadate as soon as you can! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: taixi On: December 06, 2008 17:50 CST
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Here's rooting for Kouga! Inuyasha might be realizing his feelings for Kag and how he messed up but just because he wants her back again doesn't mean that's what she deserves. Hopefully Kagome moves on to a better guy. Inuyasha can still redeem himself as to his son...
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: December 06, 2008 04:21 CST
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Wow, what a cliffhanger! I really hope you update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next. The story is just getting so interesting! Great job and hope to see a new chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Billie67 On: December 06, 2008 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story with good detail and plot development so far and am looking forward to more. Looking to see what will happen between the two because I think they are still in love with one another but could be some bumps in the road. Yash now realizes how he loves Kagome and his son while Kagome has always loved Yash but now she is afraid of being hurt again. So lets see what happens next. Kouga is to pushy and Tai won't like him so theres a problem and Kouga might not be over Ayame yet either. Great job again and update please.
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: November 27, 2008 17:06 CST
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Thanks so much for the update! Great job as usual! I am starting to feel so sorry for Inuyasha, I hope they end up together! Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 23:17 CST
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Awww, fantastic update. In a time usually meant for people to be with their families, this story rings almost more poignant. It's interesting to see how the roles are reversed... Kagome may be looking elsewhere, while InuYasha suddenly doesn't want to let go. It's a bit of a kick in the balls for him, ain't it? Haha, anyway, great update and hope to see another one soon!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 04:31 CST
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Awwwn i absolutely luv this story its sooo cute and funny! Tai seems so adorable too. And i hope Inuyasha and Kagome get bak togetha soon bt for the mean time..... i wonder wat Inu is gna do for Kagomes birthday??? OoOoOo i cant wait till the next chappy! Update soon and p.s Novenber 11 (wen u posted this chappy) was my birthday! wat a coinkidink!!lol foxy signing off!
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Reviewed By: Cla8012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 20:09 CST
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Hooray! You updated! I'm excited to see what happens...I'm hoping Inuyasha will be nice, but somehow seems like there's an evil plot bunny coming. Please update, the story is great =)
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: November 11, 2008 09:17 CST
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Just a random note - I just realized your title is spelled wrong. "Enlightenment" (just the i and the g got switched around some how). Well, this is great :) Poor Yasha's all confused and actually *being* affectionate.. of course, Kagome has no idea what to do. I'm interested in seeing how InuYasha handles the "challenge" Kouga threw down with all those flowers, though...
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