| "Enlightenment" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2010 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update i love your story so much!
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Reviewed By: Cla8012 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 16:30 CDT
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Great story! I've enjoyed following the story so far. Where have you gone? Please come back and post a new chapter. Can't wait =)
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 20:45 CDT
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Wow, pretty dramatic... But now the scene is set, Kouga is gone back to try things out with Ayame, and Inu Yasha has his closure... So hurry up and get to the "trying it again" part! Its a great story, don't keep me waiting...
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 12:50 CDT
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........well hot doggy..no pun intended of course lol. well im glad that kikyo gave inu the closure he needed but ugh i really cant stand her!! shes such a female dogg!! inu needs to get with da program n start trying to get Kagome back soon! its been 3 years already! well cant wait till the next chapter so update soon! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!!!! You tell him kinkyhoe!!!! But I still hate her...>_>
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Reviewed By: Pixie Fairy On: March 07, 2009 16:38 CST
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Yay an update! Wow ths was a really clarifying chapter. A bit disappointed that Kagome & Tai was not in it, but overall still great. I still hope it's an Inu/Kag story! Hope to see an update soon!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 12:20 CST
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Phew! That went better than I expected! I was under the impression that you would be updating much later. Thanks for proving that my fears were in vain!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 22:13 CST
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so you havent updated in a while... and i really do like this story, i want to know what youre going to do with it... i mean, i know what the ultimate outcome is going to be but i want to know all the inbetween... and this is the dilema... there is know why for me to know all the inbetween if you do not update...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tai had better make kikyo's life a living hell. That woman needs to be put in her place. And I hope this is an Inu/Kag I really hate Inu/Kik stories.
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 22:50 CST
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Ahhh.... So she's still around. I must say I was wondering when she would show up. Even more than that, I'm wondering what his reaction to her will be. You're so bad, you know? You ended this chapter like you did, and you say no updates for a long time? That's just cruel! Great chapter as always. I'm looking forward to getting an auto notice from mediaminer, telling me that you updated.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 22:47 CST
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i dont make it a habit of begging for updates. but ive been searching for something desent to read for a couple of days... without much luck i might add... until i found your story, and let me just say, youve got me hunny, im hooked. ive laughed, ive cried, ive squealed in delight, and just when the tables turn once more, i run out of chapters to read. so please, for the sake of your newest fan. update, as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: January 22, 2009 22:20 CST
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Aww...don't let Kikyou ruin everything! Geesh I just hate her. Please let this be an Inu/Kag story!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 19:09 CST
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Oh nooooo! Kouga saw InuYasha's epiphany, and Kagome's convincing Kouga to get back with Ayame, but now Kikyou's in the picture... and InuYasha's lonely. Damn, damn, damn! Things weren't necessarily going well, but they were going at least smoothly... Here's to hoping InuYasha is smarter than before... but then again, as lonely as he is... And Kagome would be peeved to find out InuYasha left Tai with his father to go out with Kikyou (which is what it looks like, if not what it actually is). Gaaaaahhhhh... InuYasha's falling back on some badbad habits.
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 12:20 CST
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It's so sad that in his struggle to provide for his family, he had forgotten why he had been doing it in the first place. Unfortunately, that can happen even to the best of us. I'm pleased to see that he's aware of what his mistakes cost him. I'm still wondering if he's going to get a chance to regain what he lost, as well as if he's going to be willing to struggle for it. Great chapter, but I have two comments to make. I don't think a janitor's career path leads him to top management. That is, unless he's the son of the company's owner. Considering how you emphasized that Inuyasha had climbed the ladder by his own efforts, it could have been a better choice to have him start as an assistant, perhaps in the accounting/finance department? Second, I've realized that there are too many typos in this chapter. I think you should edit it sometime. I'm not very good in that department myself, but if you want help, I'm here. I'm reading your chapters as soon as they're published anyways. Well, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: xstephaniex [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 07:29 CST
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I like this story, but I have to say that as a mother of a 2 1/2 year old, they do not talk like that. He says "me want this or that" and sentences are not full and half the time the words all sound the same. He hangs out with other two years olds and they all sound the same. Tai would be really gifted if he could speak that well.
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