| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 10:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I could really use one of these for human boys....anyway, oh no! subjugation beads!!! They always seem to screw things up, don't they? I really hope Kagome can handle all this, and holy crap, Sesshomaru!!! I hope him and Kagura have a cameo!!!! Seriously, very funny chapter, obviously Kagura is a little different seeing as she wasn't Naraku's slave this time around, I'm loving her personality so far!! ^-^ Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 09:43 EST
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Wow. That was just plain hilarious. Epic. Awesome. I loved it. This was my favorite part: "Black- (Smudge from water that landed on the ink) Watch (smudge...smudge) sister dears." Of course it would be smudged. That was the best. Seems Kagome can't catch a break. What if Inu finds that book? That's what I wanna know? Can't keep it from him forever... And I do agree with Kikyo making it interesting. She's good for that. I'll be waiting for your next update!
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: December 05, 2008 09:21 EST
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So I'm laughing to the extreme now. That was hilarious! I wonder what black means, but I don't think that it's as bad as everyone think it is. In my opinion black is a sexy color-not evil, but that's just me. I wonder who Sessh's mate was. At first I thought it was Kagura until it said human and now I'm thinking Rin, but it doesn't matter because I like both pairings. How she decided to write this hilarious book, I'll never know. So what's with Kikyou? Is she a demon or someone's mate? What about Midoriko? I guess it's a good thing Kagome didn't sleep with him even though I'm a lemon-lover.I wonder if Inuyasha's interested in a harem, it's funny to think about because that's more Miroku's game. Speaking of which, his relationship is probably in shambles now. I don't care cause I don't really like Miroku, but demon Sango is interesting. I typed more than I usually do. Anyway great chapter and I'll be waiting for next week's update!!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 08:42 EST
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lol Kagura's handbook *heart* that mirror thing would be creepy as hell @_@
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 06:28 EST
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LOL! I looooooove the book's title. Is it me, or did Kagura make demons sound like Chia pets??? Haha, anyway.......I(smudge from water that fell on my laptop) can't (smudge) BELIEVE (smudge, smudge) you blocked out the part about Kagome's mating mark! (I think hers was black, right?). Evil...that's what you are. Pure. CONCENTRATED. Evil. I've got like a THOUSAND questions now...or at least I'm dying to know Kagome's reaction to some of this stuff. After reading the bead thing I'm betting she probably wants to remove them. And now I'm sure InuYasha has plans to recruit Kikyou into his harem. Hmmmmm...I'm also wondering if he has plans to pick up where Daddy dumpkins and company left off, getting Kaggers prego to get back at good old God. Haha, I didn't find this offensive at all (the religious stuff, though I'm not particularly devout)...just HILARIOUS! I can't WAIT till you post the next chapter. I have a feeling it'll be especially interesting (even though, duh, they always are). ~Amber ;P
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Reviewed By: HollatoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 03:35 EST
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lols! =D!! awesome chapter!! woot!! =DDD lols i love how it is the handbook and how the writing is sooo ..imformal!! =] lols update soon please! =]
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 02:12 EST
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oooh this information does not bode well for Sango and Miroku..... and I love how you blocked the part about the black mark since Kagome has a black mark (and now I really wanna know what it means lol)...hmmmm what will happen? And what is Kagome's reaction to this information? I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 01:26 EST
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Sorry for the double post but...what about the black color? The demon...manual...guide book thing didn't really say anything about that...o_0
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 01:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God does have a strange since of humor. Lol! That was an interesting chapter! I'm in love with you're story now! Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and by the way I'm a christian and it didn't offend me....so don't worry about it.
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 00:53 EST
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Haha!!! I was laughing through that whole chapter!!! But I still must know about Kikyo!!! What the hell is she up to??? Crazy bitch... Thanks for *some* answers... I really liked that chapter, BUT WHAT ABOUT THE BLACK COLOR!?!?!?!?!? THAT WILL BE FREAKING BOTHERING ME FOR THE REST OF THE WEEK!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in, whoops!) On: December 05, 2008 00:27 EST
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I have decided to take a new way of writing a review - reviewing while reading. OH MY GOD I AM LAUGHING SO HARD, HEARING KAGURA'S VOICE I JUST SNORTED DR. PEPPER UP MY NOSE IT BUUUURNS. No, really, ow. That and my gut, which has now officially busted... Okay, so nobody else can get Kagome pregnant... but InuYasha can sleep around? *grumbles: asshole* *cringes* Aw, I feel bad for Sango, being sucked into the beads... I scared my cat when I *cracked up* at the line "demons have extremely slow/lost/confused sperm." Like, he's now hiding under the desk as I laugh like a demented hyena. Oh please, please, PLEASE have InuYasha be marked by Kagome... seriously, who glares more than she does?! Oh dear, and the black section is smudgy for mood-ring status... that's never good... And you're right. God has a great sense of humor. I mean, really! Look at the platypus! Would somebody with no sense of humor come up with the platypus? No! I appreciate your update and will whine and angst until I read more.
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 15:30 EST
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Ah finally I am able to continue reading this incredibly written story. You have me captivated and enthralled, I can't wait to see what you have planned next you devinant authoress you.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 13:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for my late review.. Turkey day threw me off. XDD Alright. So I understand a little more of this Sango being a demon thing. It's starting to get there. I'm a little worried about that comment Inu made earlier.. "She was only his mate. Nothing more." This can't be good! And when lil miss Kikyou comes in.. its only gonna get worse.. But As always I loved this chapter too. They just keep getting better and better. Update soon! And let the drama unfold!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 01:08 EST
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Yet another super yummy chapter!! I look forward to more... I hope soon!! Your writing entertains me greatly- thank you!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 00:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! Wait a second! Re-reading this I think I picked up something in that first section of the chapter (sneaky, authoress, you). I hope its not Kikyou that he misses..*cringes*. You know the chapter is especially good when I have to go back and reread it, lol. Till next chapter (don't mind me. I'll just be teetering on the edge of my seat while I wait) ;P ~Amber
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