| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this first chapter! I can't wait to read more, keep up the great job on this story, you have a new fan!
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 20:14 EST
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Sango...a demon...interesting!Haha. And the part with Inuyasha in a dress >< Hilarious. And now am suddenly wondering what is in that book? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 17:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OO Sango certainly got rough with poor Kagome... Uh...anyway, heh, I throughly enjoyed this chapter. (You get a 10!) Midoriko's mark on Kagome is strange, considering InuYasha's story on her...but then again, he could have always "curved the truth" or whatever you would call it. I'm curious as to what Kagome will find in that book. Until next time! ;P ~Koolkat191
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 13:12 EST
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hmmm there are so many things to think about in this chapter. Now I really want to know what it says in that book lol. I really like your writing style, so keep up the awesome work ^_^
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 12:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are sooooo evil! Lol...after that first section and what Sango said about her being obligated to kill anyone Miroku wanted I'm starting to doubt Inu and Kag's connection! Is he only wildly attracted to her because they're mates (and nothing more)? That has me wondering back to the Kikyou thing for some reason...gah! So mean -__- And yeah *puffs out chest like a superhero* I amaze myself with these brains, too ;) Sango made an appearance! Hmmm...I wonder how she became a demon. And whats in the BOOK! Their first meeting determines everything? I wonder how...and if "the look" had anything to do with that. Anyway, guess it'll have to wait till next chapter. Happy belated Thanksgiving! Hope yours was a good one! ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: clavira88 On: November 28, 2008 10:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh come on, don't stop now! i wanna know what's in that book too!! sango is a bitch, btw. it's not kagome's fault that midoriko imprisoned her... i wonder though where miroku sent her? anyway, hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 08:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, that first section almost made me cry! I thought he said there was no one else for both of them, he wouldn't cheat on her, would he? Don't tell me! I can't wait to find out the whole deal. And this sentence confused me, but then I figured it out. 'I was around 120, 125 before I was enslaved, plus the 500 years around 620 years I guess' See, I thought you were saying he was 120,125 years old, not 120 OR 125. I'm just stupid. Excellent chapter, I like how they seem to be falling for eachother, if it wasn't for that first section that's making me doubt him, now. :( Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 05:52 EST
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this is one of the most exciting fics I've read recently update soon
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 03:43 EST
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You tease.
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 01:47 EST
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OMDG I HATE YOU AND CLIFFIES!!!!!!!!!!! JK, I love you for writing such an amazing story(!), but I DISPISE CLIFFHANGERS!!! I must know what that book says!!! And what about Kikyo!?!?!?!?! And how does Inuyasha know Sango?!?!?!?!?!? And why does Kagome's mark have Midoriko's sign?????? It's like watching lost, more questions, but only a few answers!!!!!!!!!!! O.o
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 00:51 EST
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oh NO! *rages* GAH! A thousand questions... like... NO ANSWERS! GAAAH! *pouts* That's cruel, you know that, right? And if InuYasha has a "thing" with Kikyou, and does the whole "Kagome's just my mate totally not a problem" thing too much... I may not be held responsible for my actions. Or the loss of his fuzzy ears *grumble*. Ooooooh Questions arise about Sango!! "Turn" demon? Miroku making her disappear was pretty badass - i'm assuming that's his version of the kazaana? All in all - fantastic!! Can't wait for more! (literally... I'm angsting here!)
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh... *shiver* Kikyo's sending me creepy, devious, and dare I say, bitchy vibe right now. But, oh will it give me so much pleasure to see InuYasha tell her to back off...you know, if he ends up doing that. A nice bitch-slap from Kagome would be cool too... I really liked the chapter. :) We found out that Miroku has a demon mate and Sango was given some inhuman hints a chapter or two ago, so I'm curious as to how that works out. And we learned InuYasha's not just a horny sex machine! YAY! But really, that's nice to know. The dark look is getting me a little anxious though. Hopefully InuYasha doesn't have a dasterdly plan in store... Perhaps the dark look after Kagome turned him away again and InuYasha's rush to make Kagome his official mate are connected in some way? Anyway, I'm sure my questions will be answered in time so I'll be a good girl and wait for the chapters containing those answers. Looking forward to the next chapter! ;D
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 18:52 EST
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OoOoOo watz kikyo doing in this story??? I hope shes eitha gettin beat up by Kagome or rejected by Inuyasha.....hopefully both! But what was with that evil look Inuyasha gave Kagome?? Could there be a dark side to our sexii hanyou....? It would make him kinda sexier hehehe (ya i like the bad boys lol). And itz sooo sweet and kawaii how much he cares for her and how affectionate and loving and protective of Kagome he is! I mean it may be in his own unique Inuyasha way but itz still must be really nice to know itz there. Well i loved the chappy as usual and cant wait till the next update! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 02:27 EST
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Wow!!! That was really good!!! Soo, what about Kikyo? XD I hate that EVIL BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: HollatoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 10:00 EST
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YAY!! AWESOME chapter! =] soo exciting! =D
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